Great one-shot Gamma!

Very interesting look into the near-aftermath of the Last Day!

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!

wow... this was an exceptionally good read.

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Thanks! I'm happy to hear that.

I really loved your writing style in this one, Gamma Deekay! For some reason I found it easy to picture everything; it was very immersive for a one-shot. Well done!

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Thanks for taking the time to read it! I was quite insecure about writing a third person story, but I'm glad that it's so far gone over well!

This was a brilliant read.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Very nice one shot. I can see your inexperience with third person perspective, but it did not detract from the story. Would be very interested in seeing a continuation.

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Yeah, that's what I've been hearing a lot as feedback. And while I think the story is good where it left off, knowing that I need to improve more on the technical side of things is still extremely helpful. And thanks again for giving it a read!

Looking at the comments, I have to agree

And the guy who did the audio reading of this story did great also.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yeah, Forrest did a fantastic job with his reading!

The lovely bleakness of a immediate post nuclear apocalypse. Man, you dont see many FOEs with that as the setting. Its a nice little fic Gamma.

Have a like and a fave

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And I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! Thanks for giving it a read!

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No problem gamma.

Love the ending. Thanks for writing this.

Definitely appreciate that this didn't end up being a tragedy. :)

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!