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Gamma
Great chapter! Although, I do have to be a little angry with you for making Violet a traitor. Of all the Hauler ponies, I was starting to like her the most.
However, that notwithstanding, it was a fun read and I can't wait to see how these new twists affect everything!
FP
Woo! This chapter was awesome! Finally get to know what happened after they got knocked out! Though I'm kinda salty about Violet being a traitor, but I can understand why, she's trying to protect the Hauler Crew. But this was fun to read, insane scientists and spooky labs! A great combination! By the way, does this mean Night will be able to remember what happened down there now?
7754179
Eeyup! And he'll have to deal with everything that happen on top of all the fantastic other fun things he'll be dealing with in the next chapter!
Thanks for reading!
7756924
Hey there! Glad to see you back on board for another story! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and I hope you keep on enjoying it! And while I've never been mistaken for a girl, I do understand how someone can look completely different when cleanly shaven! I look terrible like that, and it's generally why I'm never without at least a goatee!
Anyway, I look forward to hearing what you think about the rest of the story!
7759181
You know, she wasn't really supposed to be a reference to that, and to be honest, I'd never considered the similarities! Though, maybe now I'll have to throw in some reference for Hispano down the line like that.
Holy cow! So that's what happened during their missing time! And totally called it with Night's near death experiences and him seeing changelings as having glowing eyes! This chapter also explains why Violet felt "off" to me as far as gut feelings go.
I particularly liked the setting of this chapter.
... And now, for the most important and serious question of all... What in the hay is that green goop and where did it come from?! I guess this is technically a double question. Oops.
P.S. Sorry for not replying sooner! I haven't been properly getting reply notifications from this site for some reason.
7756951
I used to wear a goatee like you too, and then I took dandruff flakes to my 'tee.
Well, that was unexpected. I understand why Hispano didn't mention that though. There was no way she could prove it. Night will still be hard-pressed to convince Delilah of that though.