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7905108 I am gladdened to hear you enjoy the story!
As for the pronouns, I figure it would be linguistically sensible to use the pronoun, "somepony," in a region predominantly populated by ponies. Likewise, it would be linguistically sensible to use the pronoun, "somebody," in a region populated by various different species.
Even more sniffle, I quite liked the corporate ponies, and will once again say that I would love, love, love a side story following a business adventure, no matter if it failed or succeeded.
Nitpicks:
"As it turned out" You have a linebreak mistake here."
" When we do get confronted," Should it not be would?
" We completed the handshake, " hoofshake, way less tasty than a milkshake