7682855 Don't worry she's not dead. The story is basically a big flashback

7682883 I know but its still sad.

I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is really great so far.

“Monster!” she screamed and ran away.
‘Nay, child! Wait! We mean you no harm!’
Despite my words she kept running as if her tail was ablaze and in a matter of seconds she was gone.

"Thou ungrateful whelp!"

7760266 Thank you for the review You confirmed a few thoughts that I already had; I'll probably edit a bit the first chapter in the future (I was originally planning to write it as a one-shot story to introduce the character of Aly before writing a story about her adventures in the Wasteland, but then I decided to write about her origins first, so I turned it in a prologue).

If you are interested, there are a few stories on this site where the protagonist is an alicorn; these are my favorites:
Fallout: Equestria: New Beginnings
Fallout: Equestria - Unity

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You're welcome, and good luck! Some cover art will help, too!

I'd actually seen New Beginnings before and heard it was good, but hadn't gotten around to reading it yet. I'll certainly have to do that soon...

I love this! I really hope it gets an update soon