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PseudoBob Delightus


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When a draconiqus archer is given the option to be free if he captures a monster terrorizing the town, he decided to do just that, along with what he choses as bait, but when he finds out the monster is a small boy will he find a heart or will he turn his back and not care at all.


This is a story for the new blood competition

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/215333/beans-writing-group


Also going for these bonuses.

The main character’s name and identity is never mentioned

And includes a bug



I would also like some judges feed back and criticism on my work.

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A mare named Blank State and a stallion named Colter go out on a jungle trip for multiple days. What will they find out about themselves? And how will this trip change both ponies involved?

This is an entry for the New Blood 2023 writing contest with the topic being "A Secret Life".

Would any judges of that contest be willing to comment on this story, what they liked and didn't liked?

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Last minute entry for the New Blood Contest:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/215333/beans-writing-group/thread/519255/the-new-blood-contest

Going for the bonus:
4 "The main character’s name and identity is never mentioned."


A unicorn harbours a secret dream to fly like a pegasus.
Story is complete in terms of the contest. Whether I take it further post-contest is not decided.

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It has been over one thousand years since the alicorns went extinct. Well, not truly extinct.

The centaur known as Tirek was led to Skyros by the Alicorn of Fire, and soon, Skyros fell, and with it, all of the alicorns within.

One alicorn who escaped hid himself from the world. He believed all of his fellow alicorns save for Opaline to be dead. Only now is he visited by a stranger who will prove him wrong. One who knows far more than she should.

TW: major character death

For the New Blood contest

“From the beginning, you know the end.”

“The main character’s name and identity are never mentioned.”

There’s a concept that is somewhat important to this story that I couldn’t find a good place to insert, so I’ll just explain the concept here:

Once every few generations, a special unicorn is born. These unicorns are called “Flares” for the tendency for their magic to flare up randomly as they grow up. While other unicorn foals can have magic flares (like Pumpkin Cake for example), a true flare is marked by magical power that flares up and stays up once they get their cutie mark.

During times leading up to great strife, the gaps between the births of flares would close. In fact, if threat was great enough, the gap between the births of unicorn flares could be as little as one year. If you were to measure the gaps between flare births, you could pretty accurately predict when the next threat is to occur (although Celestia, was really the only one paying attention and already knew about the return of Nightmare Moon)

Over the course of G4, we’ve become aware of not one, not two, but six unicorn flares: Twilight Sparkle, Starswirl the Bearded, Clover the Clever, Sunset Shimmer, Starlight Glimmer, and Luster Dawn.

And there are equivalents for pegasi and earth ponies, but they are much rarer

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders land a job at a local Wal-Mart in their desperate search for a cutie mark. The new found responsibility soon takes a toll on their sanity as they struggle to make the job work. Will they be able to keep their new job and it's promising chance at earning a cutie mark? No.

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Rainbow Dash has been given LSD by Twilight Sparkle. Dash is left all alone like a rainbow in the dark after a fun day of tripping turns tragic.

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Twilight Is asked by Big Macintosh to help with a project, but does he want something more?

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Twilight didn't expect she would get to know anypony in Ponyville, let alone travel with them through one of the most dangerous forests in Equestria to fight a supercharged alicorn in an abandoned castle.

What she REALLY didn't expect was that she wasn't going to be the one fighting.

I did not draw any of the art that is on the cover. I only photoshopped Let Me Solo Her into the image.

p.s. writing this has given me aids.

p.p.s. Thanks for getting this on to trending, I like watching numbers go up.

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