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PaulAsaran


Technical Writer from the U.S.A.'s Deep South. Writes horsewords and reviews. New reviews posted every other Thursday! Writing Motto: "Go Big or Go Home!"

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River Serenade woke up locked in a room, with nothing but himself inside. The ceiling is mostly on the floor, the wallpaper long torn away, and the walls themselves seem to be bowing under a great weight.

The only thought occupying his mind is getting out, and then getting home.

Special thanks to the proofreader 0_0, who looked at this story in his free time. Another thank you to The Descendant, who wrote the fantastic story The Silent Shore and helped me, albeit unintentionally, with the atmosphere in this story here. And to Merlos, for I know he'll see this story even though he doesn't follow me. You're a great friend :twilightsmile:

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Fluttershy asks Sunset Shimmer to join her in helping the animals in the forest prepare for the coming winter.

Sunset Shimmer agrees to help, but is not sure if she's up to the task.


This was written for stillinbeta for the 2018 Terrifying Tamantha. A writing event to encourage stepping out of your comfort zone and to well, write at all.

Also you get fics for gifts and that's pretty fun.

If you'd like to join in on the next Secret Santa, feel free to join The Donut Hut discord server. It's happening in December!

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This story is a sequel to We're Trapped in Stone, and We Must Scream


For so long, Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow stood paralyzed in their stone cacoon; unable to move. To speak. To do anything. But that didn't mean they couldn't see or hear everything around them. For age after age.

But now they've been released from their confinement and are free to bask in a changed world. Unfortunately, the trauma of their ordeal doesn't just fade away.

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An officer in the Manehattan Watch. A loving Husband. Plaything of the mare on the mountain as she weaves her tapestry of lives, thread by thread. Fairlight, the child of fate and pawn of the gods, fights against powers that throw him around like a leaf on a storm swollen river. Only time will tell whether he will become the master of his own destiny, or simply become a slave to the whims of the equestrian gods.

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This story is a sequel to The Equestria Chronicles: Prelude


Written by myself, and ponyfag-not-brony https://www.fimfiction.net/user/174091/ponyfag-not-brony

Featured on 9-20-2022! LET'S GOOOOOOOOO

Currently looking for beta readers and editors!

Rated Teen for some scenes depicting and mentioning alcohol use and drunkenness.

This story takes place during season 6 after "Gauntlet of Fire" before 'No Second Prance's' for obvious reasons. Also, the season five finale, the season five episode 'Party Pooped', The season six two-parter, 'The Crystalling,' and the rest of season six onward are not canon to this AU.


When the call of the Cutie Map beckons our heroes to embark on a life-altering quest, they find themselves traversing the perilous Crystal Mountains. Twilight and her steadfast companions brave the trials of uncharted territories beyond Equestria's borders to confront the enigmatic friendship problem marked by the Cutie Map, nestled in the distant Kingdom of Yakyakistan. But simplicity is a luxury they can ill afford, for Starlight Glimmer weaves a vengeful web, rallying her allies as she shadows Twilight Sparkle across the breadth of Equestria.

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This story is a sequel to The Equestria Chronicles: Prelude


This story is part of The Equestria Chronicles Canon and part of the Travelers Tales side story collection.


While not out of her own personal choice, Applejack is left with no choice but to leave Applebloom as the mare of the house. Applejack gives her one last lesson and one last act of big sisterly love before she leaves Ponyville for an unspecified amount of time. Applebloom will have to overcome the daunting future ahead without her big sister.

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A quick reaction, a seemingly normal response, yet things aren't as they seem. In a panicked decision, Twilight manages to find herself in a setting that's quite familiar but all the more strange. Where are the ponies? Her friends? Now, she only wishes to find some answers and get things back to normal. But, where to start?

Cover image by: TenTinyThimbles

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It's Nightmare Night and Fluttershy's preparing to leave to spend the night with her friends. Her plans are however halted when something has frightened Angel Bunny so badly that he ran out of Fluttershy's cottage and off into the Everfree forest on his own. Putting on her cap of bravery Fluttershy follows his trail until his tracks lead to a dark path in the forest. Some paths are meant to be ventured down , and some are definitely not....

Cover art: http://phantomis000.deviantart.com/art/The-Path-557359249

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A day of applebucking has Rarity fed up with Applejack. When the unicorn expresses her frustration in the oddest of ways, Applejack is left befuddled and confused. After some thought, the country mare goes to confront her friend. The discussion they have about it is nothing if not vague. Will this incident cause a rift in their friendship? Or, will it become stronger?

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It's time once again for Nightmare Night and the citizens of Ponyville are ready for another night of candy, costumes, ghost stories, and more. After Twilight Sparkle taught her the true meaning of Nightmare Night one year prior, Princess Luna takes the day off from her royal duties and joins in the festivities. But when Ponyville suddenly comes under attack by a mysterious force, Luna is discovered missing in the aftermath. What's more, this force is being commanded by a malicious creature wielding a terrible power that the ponies have actually heard of, but know nothing about.

Once again, Twilight and her friends must take up the Elements of Harmony in defense of everything they hold dear, but if Equestria is to have any real hope of surviving against this force, the ponies must first unravel the mysteries of the power that threatens them.


-some clarification: the “Lords” in the title is figurative.
-Act 1 - A Tale of Two Sisters. Word count: 72k
-Act 2 - Shadow of Malice. Word count: 102k.
-Takes place mid season 3, before Keep Calm and Flutter On.
-This story assumes there's a one-year time frame for each season of the TV show, give or take a couple months here and there.


Was on hiatus from 4/18 - 8/18 due to lack of an editor.
Many thanks to BronyDad for his help with editing!
New editor as of October 2019: Vertigo22
-Jan 2020 to present: James Fire
Cover art by Tzolkine on DeviantArt. Unfortunately, the page 404s every time I try to look at it. This wallpaper was found on google and pinterest.
The time-stamp for Act 1 - The First Adventure is wrong. I revised it and re-released it on 3/1/15.

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