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Jymbroni


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  • 45 weeks
    Why the wait for a short chapter?

    I know it's been a hot minute since I updated Harmonic Cognition, but many things have changed quickly for me. First, I recently returned from a year-long deployment to Iraq and had to spend some time with my family and readjust to life not in the desert. So much stress was involved in leaving Iraq and returning home, which delayed this chapter. Second I was also working on the follow-on story

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  • 58 weeks
    One-shot Time

    I had an idea for a one-shot a couple of months back and thanks to Alchemik and Rego it finally came to fruition. This is my first crack at a ship that I haven't really seen, so I hope y'all enjoy it!

    1 comments · 92 views
  • 70 weeks
    The Struggle Bus

    Ooof, the struggle bus was real for this chapter. Luckily, Rego was able to help me push through to complete chapter 6. Not going to lie; this chapter definitely stretched my writing abilities and forced me to look at specific sections from a different angle. Rego will probably need a vacation from editing after this section. :raritywink:

    I hope to see y'all in the comments; thanks!

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  • 80 weeks
    Yay, Chapter 4!

    Finally, Chapter 4 is here! This one took some time to get out, but it was nowhere near as brutal as Chapter 3 was with the edits. To give y'all some insight into what's going on with me, I'm currently deployed overseas, which makes writing a little tricky since I work 12-hour days. Any free time I get, I put into this story, so don't worry about me not completing it since I have the majority of

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  • 87 weeks
    First Post!

    Good morning y'all! I am happy to tell you that I have some nice updates for Harmonic Cognition. First, I want to announce that Rego has decided to be my editor for this story! It makes me super happy he will push me to be a better writer; because of this, I had to go back and rewrite Chapter 1 to explain and set up events in Chapter 3. Second, Octavia and Vinyl's relationship drastically changed

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12th
2022

Yay, Chapter 4! · 5:26am Oct 12th, 2022

Finally, Chapter 4 is here! This one took some time to get out, but it was nowhere near as brutal as Chapter 3 was with the edits. To give y'all some insight into what's going on with me, I'm currently deployed overseas, which makes writing a little tricky since I work 12-hour days. Any free time I get, I put into this story, so don't worry about me not completing it since I have the majority of it already outlined. However, I will not be able to post new chapters at the frequency of other authors since I'm still learning how to write, plus my editor demands the best, so theirs that, lol.

Also, if y'all have read chapter 3 and felt that the song section was lacking, I wholeheartedly agree. I was able to update that and give it the time and love that it deserved because I figured out what I was missing. I wanted to give a massive shout-out to PaulAsaran's A Gentle Night: Audience of One. The story clarified what I was doing wrong and the inspiration for how I needed to convey Octavia's emotional aspect to the song, so I wanted to say thank you! If you haven't read this, I highly recommend it.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/213853/the-gentle-nights-audience-of-one

I also had a question for y'all. I was wondering if y'all would prefer each chapter to have a title or leave it how it is? Any feedback is welcomed.

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