Reading reaction #1 part 9 · 5:43am Sep 6th, 2022
Chapter 26-29: I had read all these chapter and written a segment for each of them but my computer erased it due to unknown error. I could’ve tried to recreate it or re-do it but that felt wrong so I’ll summarize what I remember saying.
I felt like Sweeties but parents could’ve handled the situation better and tried to calm her down after she threw dad instead of antagonizing her more. I understood their actions but it was a dumb call.
Love evil Sweetie and Sombra who I think is the one in her head? (I made lots of crystal jokes in my original reaction.)
Her cloning herself and making her clones and making them kill themselves was so dark but really impactful and proved how far down in the dark see really is.
Hated the horn cutter patrol which I think was the point but still they can suck on some fat ones.
Her cutie mark being gained in the chapter where she busts out was a fascinating choice.
And last but not least Spike is best character!!!
Chapter 30: Changeling
Besides that knife, we didn’t have any other tool. From what Sweetie Belle had told me, she had to leave in a hurry because everypony was jealous of her magic and wanted to cut off her horn. They were all evil and intended to bring her down by taking away her power.
So she has fully descended fully into her darkness. But at least she is only killing clones and “actual ponies” and I don’t mean to say that the clones aren’t actual ponies just that it feels more moral to kill your own clones. If that makes sense?
“Promises from a changeling. Now that makes me feel all fuzzy and trustful inside.”
He dropped his head to the ground. “Sweetie Belle, you won.” His legs dropped down at his side while the muscles in his body loosened. “I don’t expect mercy from you. I know what you ponies do when you find us... If you spare me, I’ll owe you my life. And that’s also a promise. One time when you really need me, I’ll be there for you.”
This won’t end well for him or maybe even for her depending on the direction you take the story.
And then it jumps to chapter 40??? Is Fimfiction glitching or are chapters missing? (Either way I’m going to save the next chapter for reading reaction 10) again I apologize for the unknown error on my computer and I will be backing up my reading reactions so that you get the full thing next time.
This is why I always use GDocs.
It's a good thing that you have a good memory.
She changed but they haven't. They use the same methods they always used that were proven to work. What they didn't take into account is that things aren't as they have always been.
It's sad that they were lost in the digital world.
Loyalty can be proven, but only with testing.
The millennial long peace didn't come without sacrifices. Equestria has its dark side.
Canon played a trick with me in regard to her cutie mark. I had to go to great lengths to prevent my novel from becoming AU.
He can definitely hold his own.
Chapter 30: Changeling
She can always make more.
There are hidden chapters for those who look for them, but they're hidden for a reason.
You shouldn't be apologizing. Your computer should be the one apologizing.
Or just use GDoc.
Glad to see another one of these.