I hope you enjoy chapter 30! · 2:17pm Jul 22nd, 2022
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Looky looky, it's Slowtrot! probably my most disjointed character, and both the easiest to wright for, and the hardest to get a story around. He went through several evolutions before I started my first story, with him starting out like one of the ghost men from Fo:NV, with some bad ass fighting and other stuff. edgy stuff. But I'm glad I toned it down, even if his actually story ended up being... lets just say it needs updating and retconning.
The things that are needed the most updating are the villens, as Slowtrot himself is fine, though I'd remove the Littlepip-ness in him in cussing, and just have him rarely cuss, or be creative with it. it's why when a fragment of him appers in "Dance of the Orthrus" he says stuff like "Oh Puppy Farts" when something bad happens.
As for the Villeins, I would alline her backstory to that of "Dance of the Orthrus." where she is Pandora, whom inharited the arrogance of the gods and opend the jar of all the worlds evil out of spite so that she can go back to Mount Olympus, only to be consumed by the evil.
Thorn, possibly have a few more of her memories pop up.
Then Quicktrot Fragment. She doesn't fully appear until near the end of the story, so I'd just have her show up earlier and slowly develop into the monster she became.
overall the Villeins in "Stable-Tec R&D" were more in their prototype phase, but were stiff fun to introduce. And I do hope I get to finishing their own story, and how Phobetor ties into it all.
I can't wait for more story about star, harp and slowtrot!
I really love the way you write these stories especially Stable-Tec R&D because that one was my favorite of all the ones you have done. I don't know why it's just really stuck out compared to the rest of them I just really like Slowtrot. I can't wait to see more from you.