Edit to CH6

Okay, so, I have altered a few lines of the conversation between the Queen and Scarab in CH6 in an attempt to make it flow a bit better and to get across the intended message more clearly.

If you have already read the chapter then you don't really need to reread it unless you want to see the small edit but nothing huge has changed, the Queen is just a little less extreme in her apology than before, still sorry but also making sure Scarab gets what she was saying.

Anyway hope you are all doing well and I will see you in chapter 7!

Comments

[Feynna]

Don't mind if I take a look. You're actually the first person that takes advice like that into account and does something about it, I'm mildly impressed. Granted, I'm not much of a fan of editing live chapters, but in some cases it's acceptable. Yours does count under that category, though I wouldn't have been surprised if you decided to be lazy about it (I know I would have been, it's not that big of a deal to desperately warrant a change).

You're really a treasure of an author, dear. I look very much forward to where your storytelling takes you.

Edit / Update: Okay, just finished reading through it and I have to say, you did a great job making it sound more natural. You keep that up and everything will be just fine.

[Fields-of-forever]

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Yeah, I wouldn't do it every time but I wasn't so happy with that part either tbh so I was happy to change it.