Yeah, nothing too exciting.
) And wanted to know if anyone wants to collab.
Failure but with a Smile · 6:13am May 30th, 2022
So I submitted in my two stories for the Double Trouble Wincest Contest and my entry was Survival of Our Hive. AND. WHAT. A. FAILED. EXPERIMENT. THAT. WAS!!!!
aND i loveD IT!!!
No, there is no bashing on anyone and this is no mock up post, this is my geuine reaction.
So first off, this is my worst rated story to date(In terms of negative over positive). The other stories that come close are either no valid enough to be part of the equation or something different but regardless, this was a failure that actually proves a point to many of my readers.
That paticular story was done in less then 48 hours. That is THE SHORTEST STORY I HAVE WRITTEN IN THAT AMOUNT OF TIME! Cause for a celbratiion? Eh... not. SHortest being time wise, even though the words were close to 10,000.
So Ill explain that, I had already finished my other storyA warm bath with company and that one took a few weeks since the contest was announced.
DO you see the problem? During that time, I had also nearly finished a story I was working on... a month before the contest started that I will release on the next contest so I hope its more successful.
So... the effort it took me to write those two vs this one, is vast ladies and gentlemen. For my readers.... I in vain, can not update frequently on stories because that is not me. That is not how my stories work and this proves it.
Through PMs, I have been told that this work was terrible. At first I thought because it was a dark rape story, but then... Four Villianesses vs Dusk Shine, wouldn't be one of my most sucessful stories in my work. Tags: Dark, Rape, Violence and a whole lot of other stuff.
But then the comments/pms went on and I saw that this was outside of my usual domain when it comes down to stories and so on.
People were right. I don't normally write stuff like this and in truth, I hated writing it. It was somewhat of a darker tone I was used to and it bleeew up in face. And I am 100% okay with it. With 4FvDS, it had heart, story and a bit of love and I think thats why so many liked it.
This had nothing of that and it threw them off because I don't normally do this. I don't put this effort into a story that I don't want and subconsiously, I threw out a story that plagued my mind in three days that lead to no where. This was a quick shot, I missed and I am happy I did. It also shows what happens when I rush work instead of take my time, even if its for a couple of days.
Regardless if I even take a position in the contenst, I am still glad that I can show off that i in theory could write 5000 plus in a short time. I could write and make something work but I needed to put my heart into it.
Like I said the original story I had was not this quality. But I couldn't commit to it because the rules only allowed 20,000 and I... 
to my embarassment... was already at 17,000 without the main point being included and it would overpass, so I had to reduce it, which killed the story's niche in details. Like I said, next contest I do want to add it and hopefully it will be a swell one.
Lastly... this one scuked and sucked because no dragons... 
At least you enjoyed yourself. thats what really matters.
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Wait that one failed? I thought it was ok. It was a bit rough around the edges. It wasn’t really that dark since it was chrysalis . It was in the pharynx was a bit darker than usual. But not surprisingly bad. Could been a bit more insightful/interesting on how pharynx was able to get the other egg from thorax. I did like it.
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I appreciate it but its a failure that i didnt put much effort into it and it shows. I appreciate the few that do like it but i know i could have done better