Ticked · 1:02am May 17th, 2022
Okay people, let me get this straight!
Yes, I know that my grammar is under par. Yes I know that my story is “the worst horror” as one person puts it. And yeah, I expected the hate. But listen here! I honestly don’t need you guys and gals to reprimand me for something that I’ve written, just because it had a bit of a “fetish feel” to it. And so what?! So what if it’s a fucking fetish story? It’s honestly ridiculous that “you” of all people would hate it just because it’s a fetish story… .
I mean hey, look at Foal Star’s stories! He has fetish stories, and I don’t see much hate on it. And do you know why… ? Because his stories are “mostly” fetish stories! And that’s not bad because “he enjoys” making those stories! Just like me! Hence why it doesn’t get much hate. I mean sure I don’t write fetish stories often like him, but I still like to write them regardless whenever I feel like it!
So in conclusion; stay the fuck out of the comments and stories if you think it’s a fetish story! And if it is one, just fucking ignore it and read my “other” stories instead! It’s not that hard. Honestly, it’s people like you that make this community actually become cringe! No no wait; “is” cringe. That’s all.
Oh and P.S, I don’t mean any hate at all; I just hate people that hate stuff like “fetish stories”; when actually it’s just basically a sign of creativity and or expression on someone’s part… . I mean… cmon you guys… this is just ridiculous… .
comparing your self with Foal Star's fictions
Foal Star's fictions are...
1. better experience
2. better grammar
If you are influence by this writer then by all means.
you need
1. Better experince
2. better grammar
3. Understand critics if you made something try not to insult them which could lead a bad influence.
I understand how you feel. I wrote one story relating to diapers and I was bullied to no end about it. I ended up having to delete the story so it wouldn’t get any more negative attention.
I think it’s not fair that you’re getting hated on this much, but I do think you can use this as a chance to improve your writing skills. However, I don’t think it was the grammar that made people dislike the story so much — similar stories with better grammar have been disliked just as much. In the future if I were you I would just change the rating and add a Fetish tag (even if the content isn’t for fetish reasons, as was the case with my story), and then you’ll probably be able to defend against some of the hate.
5657991
I guess so
5658001
Fair enough
I'll read your story when I have time to, just don't delete it.
5658242
I won’t
5658472
Thanks.
5658884
No problem