Objective Survive once again. · 6:31pm Apr 2nd, 2022
Many of you contacted me and suggested that I should re-write the story, you have stated that currently, the story does not make any sense and, ‘’even if fairly ok written does not lead anywhere’’. And I agree. The story does not have any points of interest as of now. And chapters explaining the past aren’t exactly giving the reader any kind of knowledge. It is a mess.
I wanted to continue this for at least 10-15 more chapters but now I see that I should just re-write the story again and create a better plan for it as well. Thank you for being so kind to me to teach me and help me understand some things.
This time I will focus more on a slower pace of action. Slowly introducing things and keeping them connected.
And as you have suggested as well: the first-person perspective.
I will take my time to do so. Checking every now and then if there is something I can improve and correct before submitting it again.
I’m also changing the ‘Objective Survive’ story to hiatus.
Thank you for understanding and sorry that I can’t implement those changes now, there are real-life problems that require my attention right now.
Thats okay! You are listening and adjusting.
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:)
Glad to hear that you're listening to the comments. Many writers on this site especially new ones, can't see the difference between critisism and hate comments. While there are some comments that are just "This sucks" or "Makes no sense", always look for the ones that directly pointing out errors within the writing.
Can't wait to see the improved results. Good luck!
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Thanks!