This may be a first

So I just updated a completed story because it felt incomplete. Just This Once was written for the February Firsts contest and I ran out of time. I submitted it with a *well shit* feeling two minutes before the deadline. It was a bit rushed but still felt pretty good, actually.

But it was bugging me.

I kept looking at it and wondering why it felt so incomplete. Then I realized what it was missing: Character development.

The relationship between Applejack and Big Mac wasn’t developed enough to carry the story as it stood. But I couldn’t just shove character development into what was already written because it would ruin the flow. But it was still bugging me because it was really needed. It wasn’t until today that my brain finally clicked together and started putting together an Epilogue.

So if you liked that story, go check out the Epilogue. I really think it ties everything together very nicely.