Some Changes to the Story · 2:53am Feb 27th, 2022
Okay so, I'm going to be rewritting both chapter 2 and 3, some things might change, some things I'm just going to be adding more flesh to, since I recently got a hate comment, and though the person didn't specify why they thought the story was so bad, I myself realized some things that could do with some improvement. The story could care to be less stiff in the writing, and more descriptive explaination and dialogue. So the goal is to make the story more interesting to read and make the characters personalities more prominent!
I've finished Chapter Two and will get to work on Chapter Three. Feel free to give constructive criticism and ask about things that may be confusing or suggest things that I should add, and I will think through them and give them all consideration. Some things that might interfere with something big or something about a character that I really don't feel like I should change, I may dismiss but at least you'll know that I considered it and didn't just completely ignore it.
Something you should avoid is critasizim that is written out of spite, that is mean just for being means sake and with no explanation on what compelled you to be so because that is just so not cool. I'm looking at you, person who hate-commented yesterday.
