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I like to write and review (react) and sometimes react to reactions

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    Story Review #24

    Story Review #24 A Shimmering Heartbreak —by Spyder27

    Reward for winning a competition in the Sunset X Villain competition group and a continuation of the previous story I reviewed making this the logical next step plus I kinda wanted to see where this went.

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Jan
26th
2022

Reading Reaction #1 part 2 · 5:55am Jan 26th, 2022

Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon

CHAPTER 3:

The pain in my horn had really worried me since the fall. Fortunately, the hurt mostly subsided. I decided to listen to Apple Bloom’s suggestion and just give my fragile cone some time to heal.

Oh boy! I’ve never heard of a horn called a cone.
But it does seem like an accurate way to describe a unicorn horn.

It wasn’t the good kind of tired drowsiness like at the end of a long camping trip. The tiredness within me was different. It felt like a failure.

Dang she is being really emo in this story and we haven’t even gotten to the effects of the horn or spirits.

But what did all of it mean? If it runs in the family, is your destiny already set? Is gaining a cutie mark only discovering what you were already meant to do? If so, why do we ponies even have to wait for them? Why doesn’t everypony already have them, to begin with? I stared at my flank. Is it like a rite of passage, a stepping stone towards being an adult?

Ah yes the deep thoughts the fandom had before the show went cutie marks go BRRRRRRRR

My body shook as I remembered that my Daddy was also white. I indeed had a lot in common with my family. “Family!” I gasped as I remembered that I had already figured out something about that before getting distracted with myself. My destiny was for the taking; I knew it. Yet, it also felt kind of like the time I’d tried to catch my tail. So close, yet just out of reach. I had a hard time focusing since I’d fallen head-first on the branch. Being half asleep didn’t help with the concentration, but I had to figure it all out. I was onto something, I just knew it. Gaining my cutie mark might involve my family, somehow.

Dom??

CHAPTER 4:

I didn’t have many thoughts besides a burning anger/rage towards Rarity and her being a bad sister once again.

CHAPTER 5:

“Wait, you’re jealous of my horn? You, the Rainbow Dash?”

The Rainbow Dash sounds like an official title and I kinda want that to be one of my titles.

They didn’t have a clue what had gone down before I came to school. If they could only have been there, then they would have seen how awesome I was with my horn and pretend magic. I even made Rainbow Dash jealous of me! My classmates should be envying my awesomeness; not laughing at me.

This kinda hurts to read if I’m being honest. I had few dumb kid moments like this in my early years and now looking back I see why I was bullied.:twilightoops:

Tiara gasped, “How dare you!” She waved a foreleg in the air. “Miss Cheerilee! May I be excused” She lifted her stained tail in the air with the other hoof. “It’s an emergency!”

Lol

Comments ( 3 )

I love what you did in:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/973378/reading-reaction-1-part-1
and I love what you did here for the novel

TSweetie Belle Gains a Soul
In her darkest hour, Sweetie Belle finds salvation, but it comes with a terrible curse.
Bad Dragon · 132k words  ·  178  45 · 6.6k views

I love how you caught things I was afraid nopony would catch.

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Glad to be of service

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