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    Next chapter of Sunrise has been started.

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    After taking a week off of MLP to put out a 5k-word chapter for one of my Sonic stories, I figure I'll try to do the same for the next chapter of Sunrise, as long as it's not dull, but rather interesting and fluffy.

    No promises.

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Jan
21st
2022

No promises, but I love being a tease. · 5:55am January 21st

My story motivation comes primarily from two places:

1. My imagination, frequently running amok with 'what if' scenarios after watching an episode or movie, and at other times...

2. Popular reader requests that I attempt to capitalize on.

So, here, I'm going with #2.

Not sure when I'll get started on it, as my primary focus is on Sunrise at the moment. But a lot of you wanted to see where we could potentially go with Flurry, so I'm going to give it my best shot.

Comments ( 15 )

So this would basically be a non-canon alternate scenario.

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Yup. If it's good enough to post, readers can choose which scenario they like best.

It will be considerably more tricky to write, lore-wise, as Flurry is a much greater repository of history than Sunset would be.

It looks pretty interesting scenario not just only Sunset coming back to Equestria flurry Hearts travel through time so it looks like both of them are the only two ponies from the past are the only ones left and if I make a suggestion you should just make it a alternate universe story of it I mean like I said that's up to you whatever you make your decision

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That is what it would be. This would begin where the alternate ending left off, where it's Flurry instead of Sunset.

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Oh ok I thought it would be very interesting to see if those two see each other even though they're the only ones from the past but anyway yeah I guess that would make sense to see how she goes through this change as well

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Time Line Divergence.

Please make sure your Multiversal Stabilizers are functional.

Woo! Never expected to get a continuation off of that path, but I am *more* than excited!

Well, I'm not complaint if there is a new story, just don't burn yourself out, okay?

My story motivation comes primarily from two places:

1. My imagination, frequently running amok with 'what if' scenarios after watching an episode or movie, and at other times...

2. Popular reader requests that I attempt to capitalize on.

Same here, mate.

But a lot of you wanted to see where we could potentially go with Flurry, so I'm going to give it my best shot.

Can't say I blame them. This character really needs more love.

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No risk of that yet. My main concern right now is running out of story ideas, which is why I'm going to run with this one eventually.

More stories to read. Nice.

How to create a multiverse in two easy steps.

Well, I would say probably focus on "Sunrise" for now to give yourself more thinking time for this alternate route. But I WOULD like to see more of this route after you've had more time to properly think about it. Especially for the possibility of Sunset eventually meeting the adult Flurry Heart so you can have the best of both routes. Though I am mature enough to respect if you don't want to do that.

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I mean you could make it happen if by the end of sunrise you manage to get flurry back with sunset's help

Honestly, I'm very interested to see how this alternate story plays out.

Unlike Sunset, Flurry is not as familiar with technology, and so she may have some difficulty adapting to using things like smartphones. However, she would still find herself having to cope with living in a world that is nothing like the one she knew. She may also have to cope with the fact she's essentially a living remnant of Equestria's past...

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Point of Divergence: When Sunny Starscout explored the ruins of the Crystal Empire with her friends, she didn't just find the Crystal Heart...

She also found Princess Flurry Heart, who had been bound in a frozen limbo for a long, long time.

After helping Flurry to recover, Sunny and her friends must now help Flurry to adjust to life in a world that she hardly recognizes.

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