Background ponies to the rescue chapter 1 unedited. · 8:32pm Dec 9th, 2012
Here is the first chapter of my fanfic Background ponies to the rescue, i am putting it in a blog now because it is unedited, I have an editer editing it now, but he will not have interweb untill wendsday. Hope you like it.
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“Hey Twilight!” yelled Spike, “You’ve got a letter from Princess Luna!”
“From Princess Luna?” asked Twilight, “Why would Princess Luna send me a letter?”
“I don’t know” said Spike, unenthusiastically, “Why don’t you open it and find out?”
PUT IN QUOTE BOX
Dear Twilight Sparkle,
I request the precence of you and your friends in Canterlot. I may have found out about something really important for the history and fate of Equestria. I require your assistance.
Yours truly,
Princess Luna.
END QUOTE BOX
“Why would Princess Luna need me and my friends?” Twilight asked to herself. “I mean, why does she want us. Could this have anything to do with the Elements of Harmony,”
“Twilight.”
“What if Discord has returned,”
“Twilight”
“What if Celestia has gone missing,”
“Twilight,”
“What if…”
“TWILIGHT!” yelled Spike, “I’m sure Princess Luna will tell us what she needs when we get there.”
“Um, about that…” Twilight said nervously, “I kind of need you to stay here and watch the library.”
“Aww.” Complained Spike, “But I stayed here last time.”
“Don’t worry,” replied Twilight, “You have Pee Wee and Owlicious to keep you company.”
“I guess you’re right.”
And then Twilight went to go get her friends.
“Why are y’all always nappin’ in ma trees Rainbow?” asked Applejack.
“Please be quiet, I’m taking a nap.” replied Rainbow Dash.
“Do I have ta buck ya outta that tree again?” asked Applejack, a little bit annoyed.
“SHUT THE BUCK UP!” yelled Rainbow, “I’M TAKING MY NAP!”
“Ok, y’all made me do this.” Applejack turned around and was about to kick the tree when Twilight called to them.
“Hey girls, I have news!”
This made Rainbow Dash jump up. “NEWS! Is it about the Wonderbolts auditions?”
“Well, no.” said Twilight, “Princess Luna wants to see us imedietly in Canterlot!”
“Why would Princess Luna want to see us?” asked Applejack.
“Is it something about the Elements of Harmony?” added Rainbow Dash.
“I don’t know,” said Twilight, “She just said it was really important!”
“THEN LET’S GO” shouted Rainbow and Applejack at the same time.
“Great! I’ll tell the others, meet you at the train station!” shouted Twilight cheerfully. As Applejack and Rainbow Dash went to the train station, Twilight went to get the others.
At Sugar Cube Corner Pinkie Pie was nowhere to be found. “Hey, Mr. Cake, where is Pinkie?” asked Twilight.
“Oh, she’s in her room, she said she was baking cupcakes.’ replied Mr. Cake, “I’ll get her for you.” Then Mr. Cake walked to the basement door, opened it, and called down. “Pinkie Pie! Somepony is here to see you!”
“Oh, who is it?” asked Pinkie, “Is it Dashie, she said she was going to help me make cupcakes!”
“No Pinkie,” replied Twilight unenthusiasticly, “It’s me.”
“Oh, Twilight! Do you want to help me bake some cupcakes?” Pinkie Pie asked while mysteriously standing behind them eventhough she was just in the basement. Twilight and Mr. Cake turned around, somewhat surprised, that is, until they remembered it was Pinkie Pie, and their argument was invalid.
“No Pinkie.” Twilight responded, again unenthusiastically, “Princess Luna needs to see us imedietly, she requests our preacence in Canterlot. Applejack and Rainbow Dash are already at the train station, and they’re waiting for us…” No sooner than Twilight finished, Pinkie disappeared. “I guess she left for the train station.” Twilight said, then she left to find the others.
5 seconds later.
At the train station Rainbow Dash and Applejack were talking.
“So, I was thinking of the nickname Pinkie gave y’all.” said Applejack.
“Oh no! Please tell me you don’t like that name!” replied Rainbow Dash.
“DASHIE!” Applejack said in a lovingly voice.
*POMF*
“It’s moments like this when I wish I was an Earth Pony or a Unicorn.” Rainbow said while blushing, wings straight up in the air. Applejack was on her back, laughing as hard as Pinkie Pie did in the Everfree Forest, when they first met Twilight. Then all of a sudden, Pinkie Pie popped up out of nowhere.
“Hey Dashie! Why are your wings like that? I thought they only did that when we were making Rainbow Bits or Spicy Rainbow Dash Pastries, or that time where you fell in love with the Cake’s kitchen sink!” The last thing just made Applejack laugh harder then Pinkie has ever laughed, if you can believe it. It only made Rainbow Dash blush even harder.
“Pinkie, I thought we would never…” Rainbow stopped and thought for a while, “Hey Applejack, you remember what Pinkie’s Rainbow Bits taste like, don’t you?” Rainbow Dash got over her embarrassment to embarrass Applejack. Applejack stopped laughing and blush even harder than Rainbow Dash had been.
“Let’s stop talking now.” Applejack replied, still blushing.
“Okie Dokie Lokie! I love the quiet game!” yelled Pinkie, “321 GO!” and after that they stopped talking.
At Carousel Boutique, Rarity was working on a dress for Fancy Pants. He wanted a new dress for his wife during the new season, fall. Then Twilight walked in.
“Hey! Rarity, I…” Then she got cut off by Rarity.
“Oh, Twilight! What happened to your gourgiouse mane?”
“Oh,” replied Twilight, “I guess I forgot to brush it this morning, but I have someth…”
“I must fix your mane!” said Rarity, completely cutting Twilight off again. “What are good friends for?”
“But, but, I have to…” Twilight said, before getting cut off again.
“No buts!” said Rarity, “Now come here, this will only take five minutes.”
“But the train to Canterlot arrives in ten minutes!” yelled Twilight, “And I don’t want to be late for Princess Luna!”
“Canterlot? Princess Luna?” asked Rarity, “Well why didn’t you say so? Let’s go!”
“Well,” said Twilight, “We have to meet at the train station, you go there, I’ll go get Fluttershy.” And after that Rarity went to the station and Twilight went to Fluttershy’s Cottage.
Fluttershy was feeding her animals when Twilight arrived, “Now Angel Bunny,” Fluttershy said, “You have to eat everything before you go and play.” Angel just crossed his arms, turned his head, and thumped his foot.
“Hey Fluttershy!” Twilight screamed, “I need to talk to you!”
“EEK!” screamed Fluttershy, “Oh, it’s just you Twilight, what do you want to talk about?”
“Princess Luna needs to see us.” Explained Twilight, “She may have found something important.”
“Ok,” said Fluttershy, “But who will take care of my animals?”
“I’ll get spike to do it,” said Twilight, “Now let’s go! The train arrives in 5 minutes!” and with that they went to meet the others.
“Uh, Rarity?” asked Twilight, “Why are they so still and quiet?”
“I don’t know Twilight,” replied Rarity, “Pinkie and them have been standing there since I arrived.”
“OH! I KNOW!” yelled Pinkie, who was standing behind them now, “They are playing the quiet game.”
“PINKIE!” yelled Twilight, “Weren’t you just standing over there!” They looked back to where she was standing before, and she was still there, nodding her head. Twilight was about to question her, then she remembered it was Pinkie, and dropped the subject.
“Um, Twilight,” whispered Fluttershy, “The train is here.”
“Come on girls!” yelled Twilight, mostly talking to Pinkie, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash, “The train is here! Let’s go see Princess Luna!” Then they went into the train and rode it all the way to Canterlot.
“Welcome, Twilight and friends,” said Luna, “We are sure that thoust are wondering why we summoned you.” We have found a crystal castle up north, we belive it has something to do with the Crystal Ponies that vanished 1,000 years ago, right after we became a monster. We need you to go and investigate the castle.”
“Princess Luna?” asked Twilight, “Does Princess Celestia know about this?”
“Oh… Um…” Luna paused, “ Of course she does. If I were to do something without her permission she would send me to the moon.”
“Ok,” replied Twilight, who knew she was ling because, like Trixie, she stopped talking in third person when nervous. All the others exept Applejack belived her. Being the element of honesty had its perks.
“So how do we get there?” asked Rainbow Dash, “I hope I don’t have to walk the whole time.”
“Well,” said Luna, “How you get there is up to you, I will give you a map and you will be on your way.” Luna gave them their maps and they went on their way. “Be careful!” yelled Luna as they ran away.
“I love trips!” yelled Pinkie, “Let’s play a game! I spy, with my itty bitty eye, something green!”
“Oh, is it that tree?” asked Fluttershy.
“YES!” yelled Pinkie Pie, “THAT’S IT! Now I spy with my itty bitty eye, something green!”
“Oh, is it that other tree?” asked Fluttershy again.
“YES!” yelled Pinkie, “Now I spy…”
“PINKIE!” yelled Rainbow Dash, “We are in a forest, the only thing in here are trees and us!”
“Then where did I get these?” asked Pinkie while holding an N64, a wireless controller, and Mario Kart 64.
“What the buck are those!?!” asked Rainbow.
“What’s what?” asked Pinkie, after the N64 vanished into thin air.
“Never mind,” said Rainbow Dash, “Pinkie, have you been hanging out with Vinyl lately? You seem more crazy than usual.”
“Nopey Dopey Lopey!” replied Pinkie, “But I will assist her and her friends later in the story!”
“What?” asked Rainbow Dash.
“Oh,” said Pinkie, “I wasn’t supposed to tell you or the readers that. I may have just spoiled the plot. But if I am saying this that means the author wants me to and it’s ok!”
“HUH?” asked Rainbow Dash, completely confused.
“OH, nothing Dashie,” replied Pinkie, “I was just talking about muffins because some bronies are still afraid of cupcakes. Dumb Sergeant Sprinkles!”
“Ok…” replied Rainbow Dash.
“Hey Girls!” yelled Twilight, “I think we are almost there!”
“How do y’all know?” asked Applejack.
“Because Pinkie has the map.” Replied Twilight.
“Oopsie!” said Pinkie Pie, “I was holding the map upside down.”
“WHAT!” screamed Rarity, “I walked all this way into the forest for nothing!”
“Pinkie?” asked Twilight, “How long have you been holding the map upside down?”
“Up until I lost it 2 hours ago.” Replied Pinkie.
“WHAT!?!” yelled Twilight, “Why didn’t you say anything!?!?!”
“You all seemed so busy,” replied Pinkie, “I didn’t want to bother you.”
“UGH!” Twilight yelled, “Ok, let’s go the other way.” Then they turned around and started to head in the opposite direction.
“Tia,” said Luna, “I need to tell you something.”
“What is it Lulu?” asked Celestia, “Is it that you sent my student and her friends to investigate that crystal castle up north?”
“WHAT?!?!?” screamed Luna, “You knew?”
“Why yes Lulu.” Replied Celestia.
“How?” asked Luna.
“Well,” said Celestia, “I know everything that happens, that, and I was outside of the window, I herd you talking to them.”
“So Tia,” asked Luna, “ are you mad at me?”
“No,” said Celestia, “I was going to have them do it any way.”
“Oh thankyou Tia!” screamed Luna.
“Yourwelcome.” said Trollestia Celestia, “By the way, do you want a banana?
“Ok,” said Twilight, “We are back where we started, and we found the map, I’ll hold it this time.”
“But why can’t I hold it?” asked Pinkie, somewhat annoyed.
“Because last time you lost it.” Replied Rainbow Dash.
“I won’t do it again.”
“No Pinkie!” scolded Twilight, “This is serious! Princess Luna said that the fate of Equestria relied on us investigating that castle!”
“I think I know a shortcut!” yelled Pinkie.
“How do y’all know a shortcut Pinkie?” asked Applejack.
“I just told the author of this fanfic to stop trying to make this fanfic longer and to stop with the references.” Said Pinkie as she trotted over to a bush, pulled it back, and revealed a crystal castle. “See, the crystal castle is over there, right over this lake of GAK…” she thought for a minute, “HEY! Mr. author! I thought I said no more references to make this story longer!” Then they crossed the lake.
“Finally!” said Twilight, “We got over that lake of weird goop.”
“I’m just glad the author cut the ‘Crossing The GAK Lake’ scene.” Said Pinkie, “That makes up for the time he spent making references.”
“What?” asked Rainbow Dash.
“Don’t y’all worry Rainbow,” said Applejack, “It’s jus’ Pinkie bein’ Pinkie.”
“Ok,” said Twilight, “Let’s go into the castle.”
ONE MONTH LATER
“Tia, what should I do?” asked Luna, “It’s all my fault!”
“It’s not all your fault.” Said Celestia, “I would have sent them if you didn’t.”
“Will you help me?” asked Luna.
“Sorry Lulu,” replied Celestia, “I have royal business to attend to, bananas don’t order themselves. Goodbye.” After that Celestia left.
“Ok,” said Luna, “How can I find Twilight and her friends.” She thought for a moment. “I KNOW!” she yelled, “We must get the second most popular ponies in Ponyville, Doctor Whooves, Derpy, Lyra, Bon Bon, Octavia, and Vinyl Scratch, to help us in our quest to find Twilight and her friends!” And with that, Luna went to wright some letters.
Did you like it, took me a month to write 1 chapter because I am lazy, also working on 2 other fics at the same time. This is unedited, so feel free to comment on the mistakes found.
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sorry, the part to seperate the sections did not copy over,
sorry for the confusion.
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cool can't wait tell it comes out
591394 Wow, literally one minute after I post this blog, and you are commenting on it, hope you like this chapter.
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I'm just on here all the time and I get notification and soon I respond quick
591410 me too, I am reading your Hearths Warming Carol right now, hope you like this, will be up as soon as an editor without interweb can get it to me.
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ok good luck>>591417
591428 you didn't have to edit that comment to reply to me, when somepony comments on my blogs, no matter what, I get notifyed.
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PS: my notification sound keeps going off, but i do not get a new notification, do not think it is you so comment away, I need sugestions anyways.
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