Just Like Magic of Whoops! · 1:39am Jan 14th, 2022
... Yesterday, I was all "Yeah JLMoO rewrite is coming, lemme get it published"....
Today, I actually read it, and I'm all "What the hell? Flight contradicts herself three times in as many paragraphs of the beginning of the story!"
... So yeah. This thing's getting some pretty heavy tweaking.
*Wince* Ouch, sounds like that's gonna take a while. Good luck!