Okay so Radience… my destiny story with our favorite bug. Needless to say I did not like where it was going. I fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, suddenly exposition dumping a lot without time to explore and stuff. I have taken to unpublishing chapters 3 and 4 since those are the problem ones.
My thoughts after the latest chapter: YES! Finally, after everything Jolyne has gone through something good happens and she is reunited with her mother too. *Remembers what she HAS gone through and who is writing the story . . . Daybreaker is going to die in front of Jolyne, isn't she?
Looks good. Also interesting.
damn dude that looks nice
You know I was actually starting to get bored with this story up until the most recent chapter, now I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
Cool beans. I’m excited on where this story will go!
My thoughts after the latest chapter:
YES! Finally, after everything Jolyne has gone through something good happens and she is reunited with her mother too.
*Remembers what she HAS gone through and who is writing the story
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Daybreaker is going to die in front of Jolyne, isn't she?
Thought those were feet in the picture hahahahahahahahaha