Possibly just releasing the new story unedited.

So I've been thinking, and with the story itself over 30 chapters written, but due to poor luck and laziness, I've only managed to get chapter 1 edited. That's why I'll likely be putting out the story soon, even the unedited parts. I'll look over my own chapters for a third time, maybe a forth before putting it out. But I myself is a poor editor, worse when it's my own work.

That's why to anyone interested I'll open myself to suggestions. if I should just put it out, or wait for someone to clean it up for me.

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That all said, the story is coming along nicely... for a very grim dark story that is. And I think I've managed to make the raiders quite a scary danger. I mean if your some heroic protagonist with full plate plot armor, then no, you just kill them as soon as you see them. But if your plot armor just says, "not going to die" they become a lot more horrifying, as there are worst things then death.

Though Lottery dose have a leg up, she is no Littlepip or Blackjack, and fate is quite cruel. But so is the life of those in the wasteland, where you just have to live with cruelty and move on.

Comments

[Btf16]

I can't wait!

[starwars90001]

Go for it man.