Story Review #12 · 9:52am Dec 27th, 2021
Story review #12: A Hearth’s Warming Mess —By Heroic412227
Character’s: You know what i usually go character by character but I can address it all right here: their alright!
Premise: The premise is you’re standard Heroic stor where Sid (his OC) cause a problem and him and the main 6 must fix it but this time it’s a Christmas movie as well. It was good for what it was but way too short to leave much of a lasting impact on me.
(sorry Heroic you’re my friend but I’m just being honest. Also keep writing don’t give up on youking’re dreams.)
Grammar and punctuation: Pretty decent a few small grammar issues but overall it’s not bad at all.
Dialogue: like most of the story it doesn’t suck that bad but it’s not that amazing either. It’s just kinda there.
Flaws: It was soooooo short that I wasn’t invested I was more surprised that it was over already.
Strengths: Sid! I’ll never tire of his schemes or plans backfiring on him 🤣
But as always those are just my 2 cents and I recommend you check out the story yourself and form you’re own opinion.
Rating: 3/10 heavenly Scootaloo
Story link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/485423/a-hearths-warming-mess
Thanks.
I may need to read this.
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