I’m having writer’s block on what to do with the speeches for Gallus’ funeral. I’ve already completed the speeches for both Smolder and Ocellus, but I still need help with Sandbar, Yona, Silverstream, the teachers and Grampa Gruff. If you have any suggestions, I’d love to hear them.
I need help. I'm writing a new story that's not getting good ratings and I want a proofreader's opinion on it so I can fix any flaws I made. Story is below: