A Hearth's Warming Carol

In honor of Christmas, I decided to pick back up a project I started a while back, that being an MLP themed Christmas Carol, done to the best of my ability to be as true to Charles Dicken's Original novella while still holding the magic of pony. And yes, I am quite well aware that the show did a version of this story already, but as I am sure you are also aware, the show did a much-condensed version both to save time and keep it, I presume, from "scaring" the target audience.

Now, I am not saying that they did a BAD job, I genuinely enjoyed parts of it. I just happen to really like the story and initially just wanted to try my hand at illustrating with ponies. As I made the illustrations my muse started filling in some suitably Dickensian prose and voila. As I said before, I aim to stick closely to the original manuscript without it being a word-for-word copy or merely switching out aspects like "hoof for hand" or "Starlight/Trixie for Scrooge".

If anyone is interested, I would not be against having someone go over what I'm writing to make sure it flows nicely and doesn't have any glaring errors that might kill immersion.