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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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    4 comments · 126 views
  • 2 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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  • 2 weeks
    I have reached a decision on Midnight Rising...

    Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?

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Dec
17th
2021

Feeling better... · 7:34pm Dec 17th, 2021

But still have a lot of malaise after four days down with the flu. No joke, folks. This is the worst bout I’ve had with it in about twelve years. :pinkiesick: Anyway, just wanted to give one last update on Feathered Hearts before the fourth and final chapter of this rapid-fire release sequence is launched.

Titled Bolt from the Blue, the chapter is finished and in prereads. In some ways, this was the most difficult of the four to write, because I really had to try to work the original story dialog in. In order to do so, given the previous version was no longer compatible with what I had, lines and scenes were completely rearranged, character identities were changed, and some in cases, dialog reassigned to entirely different speakers.

As I’ve listened to it recited via voice narration, it seems to flow logically enough now, and I took particular pains to make sure the seating arrangements and escort compositions worked, both inside the coaches and out. In any event, it’s currently coming in just shy of 10k words. So you’ll be getting a nice meaty final entry as the Cloven launch their attack on the Kingdom.

In actuality, the attack started the previous night and is already well underway—the smoke mentioned in the last chapter is a sign of it. They just don’t know it yet. But they will shortly. :unsuresweetie:

Current plan is to launch the chapter tomorrow morning. So to help get you in the mood...

Get Ready To Fight ~ 1-Hour Epic Battle & Workout Mix

Lock and Load, folks. The battle to save the Gryphon Kingdom—and by extension, the entire world of Tellus—begins tomorrow morning at 10 AM US Eastern time. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Yay!

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