Mind Over Matter Later Chapters

Soooooo... I'm probably going to delete the later chapters (post time skip) because I didn't do all of what I wanted to do with those and... it just ends so awkwardly because of it. The ending where it originally was should've been the final ending, honestly. Sorry.

Comments

[chibilink]

Why not simply label them as non-canon or move them over to a separate story?

[Thelumpmeister]

i can understand it, though some people may be annoyed by this.

[Moon Hiker]

I remember first reading the story was quite the slog, but rewarding in the end. Re-reading it with the new chapters didn't really feel the same way.

[Seven Fates]

Sorry for surprise comment on a nearly two-year-old blog post.
I was wondering what happened to the rest of the story, because I remembered reading through it previously, and thought it'd been longer at that time. I think it was the later chapters that spoiled the mood and made me unable to fully like it, but re-reading it now—because of one of your other stories—I was able to say, "Yes, I can favourite and endorse it with a thumbs-up."

[Boopy Doopy]

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The later chapters basically tried to extend a story that was already finished, and focused on Leo being a little older, and unfortunately halfway through writing it, I came to a spot where it either had to end or go into really dark stuff.

[Seven Fates]

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Was a portion where Leo faced relapse after an accident involving a Pegasus friend and a fall from great heights, if I'm not mistaken?

[Boopy Doopy]

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Yes, it was something like that, and unfortunately, unless it got really deep into dark stuff, it wasn't going to work.