Umbral Souls Update

One reason it's taken this long, barring everything else in life, is that I felt wrong leaving Spike out, so I rewrote the chapters to have him included, as well as fixing some discrepancies:

1. Spike the Dog is now in the story from chapter 1 onwards.
2. I changed the titles of Celestials to Divines. I mean let's face it; "Celestial Luna, Celestial Celestia." Don't sound good at all, no sirree.
3. Changed the time of the Eternal Night having been two years instead of five.

Comments

[nightshroud96]

So all of the chapters had Spike in them now?
Cool

I'll check out the story as soon as I can.

[nightshroud96]

If I may ask um..
Was I bothersome about Spike regarding about the MLP/YGO fic there.?
I know I only made one comment on your first story(like 1 chapter or so in) and on your blog about the fic, but I feel worry and such..
Sorry if I did bother you about that.

[Night-Quill]

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I don't even remember that, but... Sorry?

[nightshroud96]

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Remember that blog you posted about you no longer continuing the YGO/MLP story?
My comments were on there.
And the other comment being on chapter 2 of the first story.

That's what I was referring to.