What could make this chapter better? · 2:31pm Sep 11th, 2021
Wanted to see what you think could make this chapter better.
Could it do with more romance, comedy between the knights, maybe even a flashback to the battle of Smuggler's Way?
I want to hear opinions.
If you want the first chapter, Here you go
First chapter is already done, but if you can find any errors I missed, feel free.