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Sep
11th
2021

What could make this chapter better? · 2:31pm Sep 11th, 2021

Love Found in War

Wanted to see what you think could make this chapter better.

Could it do with more romance, comedy between the knights, maybe even a flashback to the battle of Smuggler's Way?

I want to hear opinions.

If you want the first chapter, Here you go


First chapter is already done, but if you can find any errors I missed, feel free.

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