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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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    1 comments · 95 views
  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 2 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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  • 3 weeks
    I have reached a decision on Midnight Rising...

    Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?

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Aug
21st
2021

Another new bat-pony story from AJ_Aficionado · 7:10pm Aug 21st, 2021

And this time, it’s a paid commission, putting him one up on me. It’s set in his Thestralverse, for lack of a better term, where Rose eventually marries a Nightborne and has a large family. It’s featured as of this blog post, and I can’t offer up any better intro than his own description:

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Married and with foals, Roseluck has everything a pledged broodmare could ever ask for: a nice home, eleven healthy foals, a caring and kinky husband and a nigh-indestructible anus for her backdoor-loving bat-pony soulmate. And yet, there's a nostalgia buried deep inside her closet just begging to escape so she decides to write about every single significant sexual experience she's ever had, starting with her first.

This is going to take a while and her sorely-aroused husband can't wait to read every last word...

And neither can her son.

For fans of fetish fuel and AJA’s thestral lore I’ve used extensively in Nightmare Night and Firefly, check this out, as he adds to that lore here. You’ll learn about Rose’s upbringing and the secret of her promiscuity. It’s only just begun, and it needs to be emphasized that he’s writing this as a commission, as per a story request he was given. I’ve edited it as I always do, and will vouch for it.

So while you’re waiting for more from me--I’ll be posting another blog on coming attractions tomorrow--check it out and give him a signal boost. Let’s see if we can’t push his latest feature higher!

And before anyone asks, work on Unleash the Magic will resume next month, by which I mean both the Midnight Rising revamp and Nightmare Night. More on that to come.

Comments ( 9 )

Thanks again, Sensei! This has been one hell of a year. Four new stories. Four top box features. And I'm not even done for the year. I want to write a pony x Pokemon fic of all things and another Wincest contest entry.

Your edits were particularly amazing this time around, especially this one:

My sister, Molly Kit-cat, aged seventeen, had a job at the convenience store and loved to let the other mares and jennies in town know it by spending all of her bits on new clothes. My other sister, Market Garden, was probably hanging out with her coltfriends to get ice cream and other treats. Being only fourteen, she was just as broke as I was, after all. She did have this habit of being too ambitious and traveling too far away from home, making our mother admonish her on more than one occasion that someday, she’d go a bridge too far.

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I could not have done it without editing like yours. Thank you again as always! :pinkiehappy:

Why is Rose paired so often with bat ponies in fanfics?

Does Nightmare Night include Temptations and Transformations or are you waiting with that for now? Of all your incomplete stories that is the one that has gone the longest without updates. Although it still differs only one month from the main Nightmare Night story.

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If by "so often" you mean Fine Print, it's worth mentioning that bat pony isn't a bat pony but a human disguised as one (groan, such a waste). I'm aware I didn't exactly do it first but I borrowed nothing from that story.

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A name like “Market Garden” was way too ripe for references. So glad you enjoyed it! :rainbowlaugh:

I could not have done it without editing like yours. Thank you again as always!

You’re very welcome! It was an interesting angle you took on it, with Rose relating her own story by reciting her diary to her thestral husband.

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Does Nightmare Night include Temptations and Transformations or are you waiting with that for now? Of all your incomplete stories that is the one that has gone the longest without updates. Although it still differs only one month from the main Nightmare Night story.

I appreciate the interest, but for now, it waits. :ajsleepy: The reason is that T&T offers the least bang for the buck for me right now. It has been very slow to gain readers and even when I posted new chapters to it, it usually didn’t get many reads or comments, which I found frustrating. It was just you and Implausible Deniability offering feedback most of the time. I’m tempted to just call it complete and maybe do another side story later on a different set of events. I’ll probably come back to it eventually, but there are too many things on the queue ahead of it right now, sorry.

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It's a little weird but she's actually rewriting her diary into an autobiography in that story. That's why Europa was reacting to Roseluck writing fresh conversation into it.

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Ah, okay. I get it. Guess I missed that forest for all the trees I was editing.

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Understandable and I wasn't expecting much activity there for the time coming.

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