Feedback · 8:37pm Jul 15th, 2021
It's been over ten months since I published Sunset Shimmer: Honeymoon Suite. Since its release I've tried to match its intensity and passion in Pinkie, Twilight, Rainbow, and especially Adagio's Erotic Encounters stories.
I've been wondering: what was it about Sunset's story that made it so popular? Was it the cover art? The descriptions? The number of orgasms?
I figure the best way to find out is to ask you guys. Maybe getting some feedback would help.
I want to assure you all that I have confidence in my writing abilities. Still, never hurts to ask for help!
And if you haven't read Honeymoon Suite, well... you're plum missin' out, pardner.
Maybe it’s due to Sunny’s popularity?
It’s because I’m so horny for a sexy Sunset
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That's possible, I guess.
I like it due to Sunset's personality, and she's very great, brimming with potential as a character, even from an erotic standpoint.
Honestly I believe it’s due to sunset shimmer
I love it because It shows their journey from the beginning leading up to their marriage and honey moon which shows their passion, understanding, acceptance of the person they are, and loyalty to each other. That's what drives their love, passion, and lust for each other and makes it more meaningful and romantic when they do make love it is because of the journey they took together which built up their love for each other over the years up to marriage and will continue to put effort into their new relationship of love.
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Ooh, that's a good one!
Yeah, I can totally see that.