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Admiral Q Ponyform


After seeing huge bursts of power from one universe a Q decides to investigate

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  • 12 weeks
    Hasbro you fools

    Well got some info about Gen 5 and it's terrible. Season 9 ending with Twilight and company getting all the major races to ally and take down the Legion of Doom and would continuing this as time will pass. Well Gen 5 which is supposed to be the same universe. race relations have dropped so bad that even the pony tribes have separated so it's now like Equestria never mind Twilight's efforts were

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  • 12 weeks
    A Word of Adivce to fellow Writers

    Recently read a story called Mistress of Oasis where an Egyptian styled Queen kidnaps spike to repopulate their species which is facing an issue of too few males born and most of them are sterile. seemed interesting. but i pointed out in the first chapter that this was a bad move by the queen. Spike is considered the brother to one royal Princess. but noted in this story Spike is also legally

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  • 33 weeks
    G5 is goign to fail

    just check this out.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfCydyZ5h8E

    Faust help us

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  • 42 weeks
    When you try to help a writer

    reading an interesting story but has a big weakness. Twilight is OOC as a jerk to the stories MC with very little reason shown. they say the Elements destroyed and the princesses beaten which they show but they also say alot of Ponyville residents died but they don't SHOW it so we are to believe on just that Twilight is at the point where she can; kidnap a human, blast their arm off in the

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  • 54 weeks
    19 years and where we are now

    it's been 19 years since 9/11. a horrible event that made all Americans unified in sorrow, fear, and then anger. United We Stand was the motto. Perhaps the greatest sadness is that THAT horrible event couldn't keep us unified for even a few years. And now we are at the point of Civil War for my country. Where a seven year old is attacked by two grown women, or a man simply walking at night

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Jun
28th
2021

A Word of Adivce to fellow Writers · 5:11am June 28th

Recently read a story called Mistress of Oasis where an Egyptian styled Queen kidnaps spike to repopulate their species which is facing an issue of too few males born and most of them are sterile. seemed interesting. but i pointed out in the first chapter that this was a bad move by the queen. Spike is considered the brother to one royal Princess. but noted in this story Spike is also legally the adopted son of Celestia. so a country facing population issues could potentially be at war with at least one country. one where the rulers control the sun and moon. so Spike is a bad choice. I was blocked for making this commented. even though reading the second chapter a character points this very issue out.

also other do the usual please MOAR comments and the writer threaten to stop writing because of those comments. If you have this attitude then DON'T WRITE You clearly don't have the right attitude to write if a simple please more chapters causes you to last out at readers. you kill your story easily doing this.

On another note, currently working on CyberDash then Born for Loyalty is likely next

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Gotta love when constructive criticism results in getting blocked only to have that same person use that criticism in the story in a way. Then again, we (Americans) are currently in a time when people have a habit of blocking/ banning people for stating facts that don't work with certain opinions by people demanding everyone else live up to the standards their deluded minds thought up while actively refusing to live up to those same standards their hypocritical minds believe to be correct with no two ways about it.

One web site had a VERY BAD writer, massive flaws in grammar, spelling and in story plots, he couldn't stick with a storyline.
he asked for proofreaders and people stepped up then got blocked when they offered corrections.
he eventually got banned from the sight for posting photos that were not allowed after being told not to several times

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