A Word of Adivce to fellow Writers · 5:11am Jun 28th, 2021
Recently read a story called Mistress of Oasis where an Egyptian styled Queen kidnaps spike to repopulate their species which is facing an issue of too few males born and most of them are sterile. seemed interesting. but i pointed out in the first chapter that this was a bad move by the queen. Spike is considered the brother to one royal Princess. but noted in this story Spike is also legally the adopted son of Celestia. so a country facing population issues could potentially be at war with at least one country. one where the rulers control the sun and moon. so Spike is a bad choice. I was blocked for making this commented. even though reading the second chapter a character points this very issue out.
also other do the usual please MOAR comments and the writer threaten to stop writing because of those comments. If you have this attitude then DON'T WRITE You clearly don't have the right attitude to write if a simple please more chapters causes you to last out at readers. you kill your story easily doing this.
On another note, currently working on CyberDash then Born for Loyalty is likely next
Gotta love when constructive criticism results in getting blocked only to have that same person use that criticism in the story in a way. Then again, we (Americans) are currently in a time when people have a habit of blocking/ banning people for stating facts that don't work with certain opinions by people demanding everyone else live up to the standards their deluded minds thought up while actively refusing to live up to those same standards their hypocritical minds believe to be correct with no two ways about it.
One web site had a VERY BAD writer, massive flaws in grammar, spelling and in story plots, he couldn't stick with a storyline.
he asked for proofreaders and people stepped up then got blocked when they offered corrections.
he eventually got banned from the sight for posting photos that were not allowed after being told not to several times