Jun
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Well, that didn’t take too long. · 8:41pm Jun 27th, 2021
Cover art updated successfully, and so has the design of Nova Shadowlight.
And honestly, I’m more proud of the new cover art. Because the new character design gives off a much stronger Mary Sue vibe than the old one. That and the new cover art alone supports the tone of the story a lot more.
But I digress; what do you guys think?
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BezierBallad · 188 views
· Story: Pharynx, The Change Gang, And This Freaking Alicorn
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#Mary Sue OC
Wow very nice
Ooh, nice
Nice
Question tho? Why’s there a Star of David?
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It was one of the accessories available in Pony Creator. I didn’t know that’s what it was.
Might change it.
Edit: Fixed it and changed it to a regular choker.
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You might want to change it, probably not the best idea to have a religious symbol as part of a cover image.
I... I hate it, but in a good way.
Also, fuck her dead eyed stare in the new cover art is creepy. I love it! Gives an eerie "you are mine" vibe.
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Don’t worry, I’m already on it.
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That’s exactly the vibe I was going for! Thank you!
Christ, this is horrifying.
Good job.
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Thanks. I’m happy I came to this decision.
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Just updated the chapters to fit the new Nova’s description a lot more. Feel free to check them out if you’d like.
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Okay then
Oh god, the OC color burns
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Mission accomplished.
⭐️Wow!⭐️That looks great! I love
the color scheme!💜💗💜🖤
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You’re playing along, right?
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Listen, I’ve been living under a rock and didn’t read anything underneath the image, I just saw the image and said what I felt,…pretty much~
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Oh. I see.
Well, the character was meant to have more of an off-putting design, including the color scheme.
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Well I mean, I like it BECAUSE I have never seen a combination like that. It gives a unique feeling.
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Ah. I see now.
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The color scheme really isn't bad, honestly. The blacks and reds aren't as overpowering as they usually are on Sue-type characters, mostly because all the purple between them goes pretty good with either color. Throw some lime green on there, that'll get people vomiting in a heartbeat. Maybe some orange on her horn if you REALLY want whining.
....Honestly though, the only really off-putting part of her design in my opinion is her eyes, which... let's be real, it's pretty easy to make those off-putting. Well, that and her shoes, but that's just me, because gold doesn't go very good with purple in my opinion.
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Hm... I’m starting to see what you mean. Thanks for the input.
bravo. bravo. -sobs-