Rewriting?

Should I rewrite my first chapter of The Family From The Moon?
I would include more explanations about life on the Moon, more stories about Luna and Twilight.
What do you think?

Comments

[link4]

up to you, but you have to consider pacing in a story like this too. and rather you went too fast or not

[GhostCreator]

5523095
I feel like I'm pacing too fast, but I have never written anything earlier, so IDK.
But thanks for the advice.

[link4]

5523111
depends how long you want the story to be. it is a little fast-paced,(feels that way anyways) how much of the story is left after the cube reaches the empire? and if tis not much, then yea- too fast

[GhostCreator]

5523130
Truth be told I have no idea. I'm planning a few more adventures, but I don't know how to write them down.
Since it feels too fast I will try to slow it a little. Thanks for help

[link4]

5523140
no problem. im the last one you should take advice from- but i just write down my ideas, either as a brainstorm, or by writing it out as part of the story. then go ove rit to edit, or make changes where needed. (horrible, horrible writing method, my english teachers would be furious)