May
10th
2021
Late, tired... but I have a new chapter. · 9:52am May 10th, 2021
So, I have a new chapter of The Last Testiment of Myrddin ready, but it needs review. I'm also extremely tired, since the only time I've managed to find to write it was at 3 in the morning while the babies were asleep. That being said, I don't think it's my best work, so if you guys could look at it, I'd appreciate it greatly.
There's only one last chapter before Myrddin's tale is done, maybe two, so I hope to finish it soon, and get back to writing my other tales, now that this bit is finally out of my head and on paper.
Great chapter as ever.
I would suggest to you to add a little scene where the princesses talk with Myrddin(flashback from their point of view). It's good opportunity to present Myrddin through the eyes of someone else.
P.S. It minor change, chapter will be as good with out it, but in my opinion it would be nice addition.
5517231 I took your advice to heart, and I made an addition. Please take a look at it, and tell me what you think.
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It perfect, also far more bigger than I hope it would be.
Don't know how you did it, but you portrayed Myrddin simultaneously wise, harsh and lost. Before that change I pictured him as mad and lost. Gotta say I like new presentation of character more.