Everything wrong with · 3:30am Apr 12th, 2021
Krypto, an unreformed nymph with bright magenta eyes and blue fangs, giggled as his sister chased after him. “Hehehe! Sis, cut it out!” he replied, muffled.
“Not until you give me back Snuggle Fang!” Kymara, an unreformed nymph with dark blue eyes, magenta fangs, and a bit taller than Krypto, yelled.
Krypto looked at the plushie on his carapace. “No! Daddy said it was my turn to play with him!”
Kymara whined. “But you’ve had him forever! Mommy said it was my turn!”
The two continued running around. Canterlot was quite a nice place. They had a nice and open townsquare, lots of room to run around. Not that anypony seemed to mind.
Blue Fang, an unreformed changeling with blue fangs, watched the nymphs from a few meters away. “Don’t go too far guys!” he called out.
They looked over and nodded. “Okay daddy!” Kymara called back.
Blue smiled and looked around. He was waiting for his girlfriend, Kydra. Where she was was anyone’s guess.
Wheres chrysalis?
Sin: 1
Soon, the two nymphs had been playing for about twenty minutes. They were growing tired. They soon walked tiredly back to Blue Fang. Blue smiled and scooped them up. “Heheh, come on you two. Let’s go find mommy, m’kay?”
The two smiled and nodded, buzzing their wings. Blue chuckled and began walking down the streets, looking for the magenta eyed changeling.
You said they were nymphs?
Sin: 2
Why did you buzz your wings if you’re tired?
Sin: 3
They’d been looking for quite a while, but had no luck. The only place they hadn’t checked was the castle. They approached the gates. Blue looked around.
Haven’t not hadn’t!
Sin: 4
“Hm… okay, I’ll go look around this way,” Blue said, pointing towards the entrance of the castle. “You two can go check the garden.”
“Okay!” they said galloping off. The two continued running, passing under the gates and running into the gardens. The two began looking around.
Galloping off and running are different!!
Sin: 5
You say the two a lot!
Sin: 6
“Hm… I don’t see mommy…” Krypto said.
“Me nei’der…”
It’s neither not neider!
Sin: 7
The two continued looking around, until they heard…
Crying?
It sounded like a mare, but they weren’t sure. They looked in the direction.
“It’s coming from that way!” Kymara said, running towards it.
“K-Ky! Wait!” Krypto followed behind.
Why question mark?
Sin: 8
They have to know it’s a mare!
Sin: 9
The two continued running, until they found the source of the crying. An unreformed changeling with magenta eyes and a silver earring was sitting in front of a statue that held three creatures, one a minotaur looking creature, another a pegasus filly, and finally, an all too familiar looking changeling.
But, the kids weren’t focused on them, instead on their mother.
That’s mean!
Sin: 10
Why don’t they know that’s their mom?
Sin: 11
“Mommy!” they called, running over.
The changeling, Kydra, looked up. She smiled slightly as they ran up and hugged her. “Heheh… hey kids…” she said, smiling. The two nuzzled her. She smiled and nuzzled back.
Stop saying heheh! It’s creepy?
Sin: 12
You said smiled twice!
Sin: 13
Krypto looked up and noticed Kydra’s tears. He whimpered. “Why’s mommy sad…?”
She pulled them close. “I-It’s nothing, really…” she said, but the kids knew she was lying.
“You ca’ tell us mommy,” Kymara replied.
Krypto nodded, nuzzling Kydra. “Yeah. You aw’ways tell daddy to ec’press his emu-tions.”
Kydra couldn’t help but laugh a bit. It was true, anyway. She always wanted Blue to tell her about his feelings. “Heheh…” she wiped her eyes. “Okay, okay…” She sighed, looking up at the statue, most importantly, the changeling. “You know who this is, right?”
The kids are annoying!!!
Sin: 14
They say mommy a lot!
Sin: 15
“C-Chr…” Krypto struggled to form the word.
“C-Chry… Chrys’lis!” Kymara said.
“Mhm.” Kydra nodded. “I’m sure you’ve heard the stories of how she was evil, right?” she asked, to which they nodded. She sighed and looked around to make sure no one else was around. Then, she looked back at them. “Well… most of those stories… they’re lies.”
Plus 5 for annoying kids!
Sin: 21
The nymphs blinked. “Wha’ do you mean?”
Kydra looked up at the statue. She sighed again. “You see… Chrysalis… my mother, and your grandmother…” the two looked surprised.
“Wait… you mea’ Chrys’lis was your mommy?”
“Mhm…” Kydra nodded. “She only wanted what was good for the hive… sure, she hurt some of the nymphs, but…”
They are changlings! Not nymphs! Plus 1! Also plus 5 more because the kids are annoying!
Sin: 27
“Bu’ wha’?” Kymara asked.
Ew the kids can’t spell!
Sin: 28
Kydra looked over. “Well, at the end of a war between changelings and ponies long ago, the royal sisters agreed on a peace treaty to settle the war and give us land. But, some... “miscommunication” happened with Luna, and…”
“Wha’ happen’?”
Kydra shook her head. “She burned the hive to the ground…”
“Eep!” Krypto whimpered and snuggled closer to Kydra. She rubbed his head lovingly.
Krypto is a baby!
Sin: 29
Wha?
Sin: 30
The hive is still here though!
Sin: 31
“It’s okay Krypto. That won’t happen again, I promise.” She smiled at him. He nuzzled close in comfort. Kymara, however, growled. “What’s wrong, ‘Mara?”
“I’s no’ fair… they can’t jus’ do that…”
Kydra nodded. “I know, but it’s all in the past…” She looked back up to the statue.”She was just… She feared that if the ponies found out we were back…”
“Oh…”
Kydra nodded, then her eyes began watering again. “I… I just miss her so much…” she said, voice breaking. A few tears fell from her eyes. “W-Why didn’t they give her a chance?!” Kydra buried her face into her hooves, sobbing.
How do the kids know already?
Sin: 32
No context!
Sin: 33
The two nymphs whimpered, watching their mother cry softly. They needed a way to cheer her up. Snuggles, tickles, nuzzles, songs, anything. Wait, song? That was it!
Kymara and Krypto nodded at each other, before snuggling up to Kydra. They hesitated, but soon started.
Nooo!
Sin: 34
[Kymara]
In Elysium's Fields, the roses grow
Between the gravestones, row by rowKydra wiped her eyes and looked up. “H-Huh…?”
[Krypto]
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the bombs below
We have fallen, some time ago
[Kymara]
We lived, felt dawn, watched the sunset glow
Loved, and were loved, and now we lieIn Elysuim’s Fields, in Elysuim’s Fields
Kydra wiped the tears away, smiling.
[Kymara, Krypto]
There’s no more quarrel with the foe
Together we help each other grow
The torch, be ours, to hold up highKydra yawned, the song slowly putting her to sleep.
These kids can’t put their mom to sleep with a song! Plus 10 sims!
Sin: 44
The kids are bad at singing! Plus 5 sins!
Sin: 50
[Kymara, Krypto]
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though roses growIn Elysuim’s Fields~
The two nymphs took breaths, looking up at Kydra. They smiled upon seeing their mother sleeping peacefully under the statue. They smiled and nestled close to her, soon falling asleep with her. Soon, Blue came around, then smiled. He walked over and packed the three onto his back. He smiled and began walking back to the train station.
How can blue carry them all??
Sin: 60
The kids are acting like parents!
Sin: 65
Kydra opened her eyes. She looked around, noticing that she was back in her old room. She blinked, then noticed a tall changeling walking over, Her eyes widened. There standing in front of her was a certain changeling queen staring at her, a kind smile on her face. Kydra immediately stood up and hugged the queen.
“M-Mama…” she said, tears slowly falling.
“Heh, hello Kydra,” she replied, smiling. Kydra nuzzled her. “Heh, love you too.”
Kydra snuggled up to Blu and the nymphs, smiling as her dream brought her newfound happiness.
How did chrysalis come back??
Sin: 66
Chrysalis saying heh is creepy!
Sin: 70
CHANGELINGS not nymphs
Sin: 80
Also plus 20 sins for the kids
Sins: 80
Sentence: Kidnymphlings
Well at least my fic actually makes since you uneducated potato
Also, you might want to actually read my head canon to understand what’s even happening
And even then, this is one shot
My other fics aren’t required
Geez, I've heard of petty revenge but this is just an entire other level
Seriously, can't you take criticism?
Changelingsare not nymphs
These sins don’t make sense
You’re trying way too hard
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Baby changelings are
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They never said that in the show
Also teen titans go movie has better sad parts!
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Cookieheart didn’t happen in the show
And what does TTG have to do with this?
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It can happen
Also In the movie my husband got hypnotized and tried to kill hiss friends
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Ew piss-poor makes no sense
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“Husband”
Get some help
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...I’m about to light you up like a fuckin’ machine gun.
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You say I hat criticism and you are hating on me because I critisisedso haha I wim
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Let me help you
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Next time
She wants to play rough
I can play rough
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Robin becomes evil that’s sad because his friends have to save him
Your isn’t sad because the kids start singing a song to their mom and that’s weird
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I did
Blue the dad tells his kids to help him find their mom after they were tired.
The kids find her and ask her about chrysalis and sang her a song
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It’s not supposed to be sad
And you can’t call this criticism
It’s just bullying
I’m trying to fix your fic
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It is just watch it https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=-hYjWDRQzpk
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The hive was destroyed they said but it’s not a
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No
I still want to know the purpose of this... “sins” thing
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To critisise you
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This isn’t criticism. Name one part that makes sense
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Also I will tell you what they say
Sade turns around obin and he has red eyes
The others gasp!
Sade tells him to get them
He walks towards them and rave says robin snap out of it and he says you always held me back and best boy says what are you talking about and he kicks him and raven says best boy star fire says obin this is not the you and he kicks her and ciborg says fight it man and they all are kicked and safe says finish them so rob says kill! ciborg put In a video for him and he became normal again
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It’s true it wasn’t destroyed
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That doesn’t matter
Tell me how this review makes sense
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That is awful grammar and no amount of sadness will ever make me like ttg
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I was telling you what you did wrong
For example you make the nymphs too smart but they can’t spell
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And he says itans? and star fire says he is the back and rvan says you were never a joke to us
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They’re kids
They can’t talk right
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Kids not babies
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That’s what I said
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Oh, I'm sorry, have you ever met a kid under seven years of age who had comprehensible speech?
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If they are kids they shouldn’t have speech impediments
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Yes my 6 year old sister
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That's weird, all the ones I've met are incomprehensible. But seriously, you act like writing nymphs who can't talk properly yet because they haven't learned yet is a crime. You got something against speech impediments? Huh?
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Do you guys want to call it a night? We can light her up tomorrow.
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Alright then
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FINALLY
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Oh, I’m far from done
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😤
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^u^
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What is that ^u^ O.O
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A smile
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😈
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=-hYjWDRQzpk
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You know what? I’ll give you one more chance
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/944548/shooter-in-the-halls
Do an Everything Wrong With this. If you make valid points, I’ll apologize
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Does that mean you like the evil robin scene!?
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Perhaps
Make valid points
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Ok!
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???