Setbacks

Sooo, here's the problem. I grossly underestimated how long this chapter of TFOF would be. That thing I said about in the next chapter we'll meet Sunset Shimmer and Domino? Yeah, that's looking less and less likely. How? Why? Simple,

Action scenes

You ever try to write one? Spolier, they're kinda hard to do. Which is why most action stories either condense the action to a minimal portion, or they spend way too long and way too much time writing them. SO, here is my proposal:

I could A) Fulfill my original promise to have Domino and Sunset in the next chapter, BUT the chapter will be longer than usual and will take longer to pump out

OR B) I could push back the 'Meeting Domino Squad and Sunset' thing and split the work I have now into three chapters to give you guys something (1 chapter to show off our characters, one for the actual fighting, and one that is the prelude into meeting Sunset and Domino).

What are your thoughts?

Side Note: I feel like To Forgive or Forget isn't a good title anymore, since that name was originally made in mind of a different plot than what I ended up writing. Because of the mixing in of EQG, that name won't fit anymore, so I plan on changing it. What are your thoughts?