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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Today
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Mar
23rd
2021

Feathered Hearts: C&C - initial release complete · 4:24pm Mar 23rd, 2021

Well, after putting on a massive push over the past week to get Feathered Hearts launched and then refreshing my browser about every thirty seconds for three days straight to look for new likes and comments, it's time to let that simmer for a bit while I head back over to work on Midnight Rising. But before I do, I did want to welcome and thank all new readers of the story for dropping likes and comments, and give a shout-out to the dozens of new watchers who came to me from the original Feathered Heart to await the continuation.

So what does the future hold for Feathered Hearts? Well, there is going to be a second, and likely a third bonus chapter before I resume work on editing the existing stuff. Reason being, I believe it will take three chapters to finish off this little story arc I've started and fill in the time gap between chapters three and four of the original story. I know folks are probably eager to get to the Cloven, but I will ask you to indulge me and let me take the time to do this right. There are a couple things I really want to set up and deal with, first.

When the continuation is reached, I know roughly the course the story will take, and its conclusion--if you want some hint of what may happen and who might be seen, note the character tags on the story--and there's even an idea regarding the Hall of Heroes that's sorely tempting me that I don't yet know if I can pull off.

But all that lies in the future. For now, may it be enough that the story of Feathered Heart is reborn, and I promise that I will do it justice to the best of my ability.


EDIT: I removed the middle half of this, as I decided I was just being obnoxious by advertising my other stuff. My apologies to anyone who took offense.

Comments ( 4 )

I admit that I hadn't even looked at the tags before. Interesting. Very interesting. If the Cloven are anything like the source they are based on, I can definitely see the need for some big horns and wings if things progress badly.

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I admit that I hadn't even looked at the tags before. Interesting. Very interesting.

I won't say more for now, but consider it a little foreshadowing. :coolphoto:

If the Cloven are anything like the source they are based on, I can definitely see the need for some big horns and wings if things progress badly.

I'm guessing the Cloven are based on the Zerg from Starship Troopers given how often that movie was referenced in the original, but I never saw it. I'm planning to watch it later as I get into later chapterss. Based on what I'm familiar with, I think they either take after the Flood in HALO, or more recently, the Grimm in RWBY.

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I'm guessing the Cloven are based on the Zerg from Starship Troopers given how often that movie was referenced in the original, but I never saw it. I'm planning to watch it later as I get into later chapterss. Based on what I'm familiar with, I think they either take after the Flood in HALO, or more recently, the Grimm in RWBY.

I'm nearly certain they're based on Codex Alera and the Vord.

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I see. Unfortunately, I’m not familiar with that at all. I’ll study up before we hit the Cloven chapters.

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