Ramble and some new material · 4:04am Mar 20th, 2021
Hmm. Honestly, I'm a little surprised that last story didn't get rated higher. Last I checked it had as many thumbs down as it did up which I did not expect. *shrugs* Guess it was a fizzle. Not really any constructive feedback on what was disliked.
Ah well, my armor is not so thin to go cry about it. As long as I'm still having fun being creative the rest is just the cherry on top. Onward and upward.
So, next up in the series is going to take us back to Equestria right after Twilight has been coronated and now has to deal with having all the problems of being in charge dropped on her. So naturally she needs individuals who know how to run a government including the guard.
The story follows Tempest Shadow as she tries to take over command of the Canterlot royal guard. She is not well received by many, both in the guard and in the nobility. But Tempest knows that Twilight will need all the help she can get since her close friends can't be there to back her all the time. Luckily, she doesn't have to take on the task alone.
Got Your Six Rough by MasterDarhil on DeviantArt
The writing has begun on "Got Your Six" but it will still be a bit before it hits the site. Needs lots of work.
In all honesty, I think the only reason the last story got so many dislikes is that it was clop. It was still very well written from what I can tell. That style of story is not exactly my taste so I just got the general gist before bugging out.
Still, definitely looking forward to the Tempest Shadow Story. Sunset & Tempest are my favorite characters so you're definitely writing grade-A content in my eyes.
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I think you hit the nail on the head there. It seemed well written and I liked the first part for overall story details. But the second part wasn't for me so I just skimmed over it for any more story threads (and thankfully, there was one at the end)