TIncarnate
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High school is over and the next step in life awaits, however magic is still on the loose. Sunset Shimmer struggles to find her place in the world and must find a way to contain the magic or have the portal sealed forever.
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5 weeks
Small update

Writing has been slow because I needed a break from it, but I have been doing art from time to time. I should probably put that in quotes. While I think some AI art does look beautiful it still bothers me that most of it is created by stealing other people's hard earned talent. So, I would never generate any myself. I have, however take some other people's generated art and used photoshop to
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19 weeks
Incarnate Soundtrack and titles

So, I posted a little while back on thoughts about updating the chapter titles for Incarnate. Ultimately, I am choosing to leave it as is because it does not need them.
However, because my brain makes demands sometimes I AM going to go ahead and post the chapter song titles that makes the Raven in my head pleased.
1. Destination Unknown by Marietta
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22 weeks
Pondering...

So, I'm sitting here sketching art for the next chapter of Incarnate: Conversations Incarnate: Conversations and I take a moment to go to my own story list. I sometimes like to check the analytics, I mean they provide them so why not, right? I'm
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37 weeks
Update on what is going on.

Good evening all who make their way over to this. I figured I would give an update on what I have been working on and what still needs to be done.
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42 weeks
For the Girl Who Has Everything Wrap up

So, put a little bow on that one.
To begin with, I know this does not break any new ground and that probably is a bummer for some. But honestly, I like filling in some of the missed opportunities and side stories that the Incarnate Series left for me. At the start, I had no idea that I would get as many stories out of the series as I already have. Still, muse shouts, I listen.
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Re-read and clean up edits · 1:13am Jan 28th, 2021

So, while I have been diligent in working on Gods and Monsters, just finished chapter 24, I have also been going back through Incarnate fixing minor errors I missed the first (and second) time through. I don't think they took away from the story, but it looks cleaner and better now.

So if anyone is interested in doing another run through I hope it's just as good for you as it was for me to write it.

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