Bat Pony Marriage Rituals edits done

I have finally completed editing the story. If you want to read it then you can and if you do not want to, I fully support why you do not want to read it. I added a lot more detail to the second chapter to give more details on the rituals and backstory of the Thestrals/Bat Ponies. The other chapters are the same with added scenes to pace out the chapters better.