Slight Delay on Next Starting Over Chapter

I looked at the current chapter I have in progress and decided that it might be better to scrap it and write a different chapter. The reason being is the chapter in it's original form had Sunset and Number trying to once again confront Lantian about her racism. This has been a theme throughout the Pandemic series, but this chapter would have been one of the most heavy-handed confrontations of it yet. With that in mind. I'm going to step back and do a rewrite of the chapter.

I will probably preserve the original few paragraphs, but will go a different direction with the chapter. If anyone is interested in reading the unfinished original draft. I am posting it here.

Unfinished Original Scrapped Chapter

Comments

[harts fire]

sounds like a good plan to me.

[Javarod]

I look forward to seeing the updated version, because as one of the proofreaders on it, while it wasn't bad, it wasn't good either.