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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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    1 comments · 94 views
  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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    4 comments · 126 views
  • 2 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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  • 2 weeks
    I have reached a decision on Midnight Rising...

    Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?

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Dec
15th
2020

Next Midnight Rising Chapter will be released soon · 5:54pm Dec 15th, 2020

I'm close to finished. I intend to have it draft complete tonight, meaning release should follow in the next couple days, once prereaders have their say and I do my customary couple editing passes, which I do by listening to it recited back to me with the site's voice narration feature. You'd be surprised how many issues you catch and fix by doing that, from missing and misspelled words to just questions of word choice and sentence flow.

As promised, it's the Fleur De Lis chapter, though it's as much a continuation of the action in the last chapter as picking up with Fleur. Her scene was kind of abbreviated last time, but it's much more extended now as you find out what not only Midnight, but the rest of Crystal Prep thinks of her and why. In addition, you'll get plenty of bonus action from the CHS side, including a peek in on our Principals and Dean. Some reader requests have been made regarding them, and as enjoy fanservice, I'll do my best to deliver them in coming chapters if not here.

I said last blog that I would put Midnight Rising on hold after this. And I will, shifting over to Firefly. We'll have to see if I still feel that way in two weeks, as I just received my latest testosterone infusion (implanted pellets). It typically takes a couple weeks to fully kick in, at which point... yeah.

In the meantime, hope you like the new chapter and thanks for all the comments on the last blog. If I hear back from Demon Eyes Laharl regarding taking over Feathered Heart, you'll be the first folks to know.

Comments ( 1 )

Can't wait to get my hands on that draft!

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