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StacheHand


I am a longtime fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic who loves Pinkie Pie, drawing, typing stories and having a good laugh.

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  • 14 weeks
    Mid-2021 Update

    Hello everyone. I have officially finished the first part of my rewrite for the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic series finale. I hope anyone who takes their time to check it out will enjoy what i've written so far, because it took months. But of course, feel free to provide any criticism, and be honest, because it's meant to be a fun writing exercise, and i'd like to improve in that

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  • 31 weeks
    Fanfiction update for 2021

    Hello, everyone.

    I hope you had a good Valentine's Day. I turned 27 a couple of weeks ago, and i'm feeling like I should be growing some white hairs by now.

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  • 40 weeks
    Near Christmas Update

    I just thought i'd give you guys an update, as we close in on Christmas.

    First of all, i've written down my Christmas wishlist, and my folks and I are close to done with the Christmas shopping we're able to do, considering the current conditions of the outside world.

    I've recently had some stomach problems that i've needed to get over. They seem to be mild, though.

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  • 50 weeks
    Quite a while

    Boy, it's actually been 3 months since I posted the third chapter of The Brilliance of a Restful Mind. Sorry about that, everyone. As an aspiring storyteller who wants to do a bunch of things, I unavoidably end up in that kind of spot where one is unsure if they want to get the continuation of their stories figured out, or go do something like drawing, or typing out some other idea, or maybe even

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  • 64 weeks
    Break Time

    I have just finished the latest chapter of The Brilliance of a Restful Mind, after so many months of planning it out and taking so many days to type it. I hope you enjoy it, and look forward to Chapter 4 coming someday.

    I've decided that after getting Chapter 3 done, and seeing how long it turned out, I am going try taking a bit of an online break to do some more drawing. Catch you folks later.

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Dec
12th
2020

Near Christmas Update · 8:01pm Dec 12th, 2020

I just thought i'd give you guys an update, as we close in on Christmas.

First of all, i've written down my Christmas wishlist, and my folks and I are close to done with the Christmas shopping we're able to do, considering the current conditions of the outside world.

I've recently had some stomach problems that i've needed to get over. They seem to be mild, though.

And on a fanfiction related note, sorry that I still haven't written the next chapter of The Brilliance of a Restful Mind. I promise you it's not cancelled or anything, i've just been a slow and lazy person, spending time writing miscellaneous things, listening to music and watching videos to keep myself entertained. If you've put up with me for this long, thank you, and if I ever get Chapter 4 up, I hope you'll continue reading my story.

One reason I haven't been writing Chapter 4 is because i've been planning something that's a lot bigger than The Brilliance of a Restful Mind, though it's far more... let's say derivative. I intend on doing a rewrite of the final two-parter of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and even slightly rewriting the arc episodes leading up to it. Yeah, I know, it's been done before, but I have some ideas that would've enhanced that final arc in ways that feel more satisfying to me personally. I used to like the final two-parter, kind of, but have grown a whole truckload of disdain for it in the year since it premiered, which is what inspired me to buckle down and think about how i'd rebuild what I now perceive as a terribly flawed final arc for an otherwise great T.V. series. No, I don't see myself as superior to the MLP:FiM writing staff in any shape or form, and whenever I get this rewrite off the ground, nobody has to accept it as canon. As much as I now hate the official arc and final two-parter, I realize they can never actually be redone, replaced or erased. What I make will just be fanfiction that reshapes this storyline to my preference. Here's what to expect from this:

  1. Filling the void left in the League of Evil after Sombra's final defeat (the replacement character may not be who you'd expect)
  2. Giving the Bewitching Bell more powers to make it more of an interesting and threatening item
  3. Making the League of Evil's power enhancements from the Bewitching Bell more interesting
  4. Expanding on the mistrust that builds among the pony races
  5. Having the League of Evil's plan to double-cross Grogar fail, inspiring a new approach to eventually taking his power for themselves
  6. Removing a certain plot twist regarding Grogar, thus making him part of the story for real
  7. Remembering a certain long-lost magical charm is a thing and integrating that into Grogar's plan (want to guess which one, and for what purpose?)
  8. Remembering the whole thing about Grogar being the Father of Monsters and integrating that into the League of Evil's attack
  9. Showing how exceptionally intelligent, powerful, sadistic and resilient Grogar really is
  10. Giving Tirek an interaction with Starswirl
  11. Establishing a connection between Grogar and the many world-threatening events that happened throughout the entire series
  12. Altering Discord's motivations
  13. Giving characters like Sunburst, Trixie, Thorax, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, the Student Six, Shining Armor and Cadence more to do
  14. Revealing a certain character from a certain villain's history
  15. Showing that Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon still lie dormant in Celestia and Luna and making them integral to the heroes' survival
  16. Remembering that the Treehouse of Harmony is a thing and making it integral to the heroes' success
  17. Making the shards of Chrysalis' throne integral to the heroes' success
  18. Giving Chrysalis interactions with Thorax, Ocellus and the rest of her former subjects
  19. Giving full closure to Gallus and Grampa Gruff's relationship
  20. Explaining what became of Tirek's kingdom
  21. Showing how much closer the League of Evil have become as partners in crime since they were first formed
  22. Giving Cozy Glow interactions with the Cutie Mark Crusaders
  23. Adding a lot more action, especially to the final battle
  24. Putting Twilight through so much more physical and mental trauma to bring her to as critical a low point as possible to rise back up from
  25. Making the Windigos have more of a devastating effect on the world
  26. Giving the villains a more near-decisive victory before their ultimate downfall
  27. Calling back to the Founders of Equestria in a plot-important way
  28. Remembering Flurry Heart being the heroes' last chance if all else fails
  29. Having some supporting characters die in the conflict
  30. Bringing back a certain forgotten power-up, and making it better than ever
  31. Expanding on the League of Evil's punishment after they're defeated
  32. Giving Discord a proportionate punishment
  33. Having a bittersweet bookend with Twilight in a position paralleling what was established at the very beginning of the series
  34. Explaining that the horrible experiences of this final battle for the fate of the world have left Twilight emotionally crippled

    So whenever I get a full script for this rewrite off the ground, i'd like to share it with anyone who'd be willing to look into it and see what I could do to improve it, and whenever I truly get it out there, I hope it can be enjoyed by not only those who, like me, were dissatisfied with the official final arc and two-parter, but even those who do like it. If any of the things I listed sound interesting, or silly, let me know. Or don't. I'm a small FIMFiction user, so I don't expect a flock of people to come commenting here.

    That'll be all for the moment. Here be Stache Hand the Clutcher, out and about!

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