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Just your average girl who stans Sunset Shimmer. 🤟🏼 Ship LunaXChrysalis 😛

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Dec
7th
2020

Questions · 3:37am Dec 7th, 2020

Hi guys! How are you all?

I just wanted to post a blog on here to ask a few questions on Aftermath Of The Formal, I’d greatly appreciate some feedback!

Here are the questions:
1. What do you think of the story as a whole?
2. What would you change?
3. Is there anything that you would like to see happen?
4. What do you expect to happen?

As for Chapter 22, I am working on the last scene, and hopefully, fingers crossed, I'll be able to publish it in 2 weeks maybe? I'm not going to promise that it’ll be out sooner than that, but I’ll keep you all posted! Thanks for the support! :)

Comments ( 7 )

1. It's great.
2. Add the mane 5 more often.
3. Sci Twi appearing or Sunset getting a new look.
4. My only hopes to see in a future chapter if happen is Sci Twi appearing and Luna & Sunset start to feel like a family.

1. Well I love it. After all it inspired me to write mine.
2. I would add more of the main five girls.
3. Sci-Twi, Sunset hanging with the main five more often. Maybe see her and Trixie make amends.
4. I know Chrys and Luna are about to have something major happen there. So we will see if I was right.

1. I love it.
2. More of the Main 5
3. I could live with out Sci-Twi making a sudden appearance, how about adding in the Dazzlings.
5. Luna to officially adopt Sunset, and for Chrysalis to move in with them.

1. It's great that I constantly checking my phone for new about it.
2. Get a different perspective on the situation of sunset from a student or someone else on what they thought of it.
3. Sunset talking about her past with the Princess to her soon to be two mama's and a trip just the three of them.
4. Oh oh oh im just rubbing my hand in anticipation of what you have cooked up, so I shall wait and see.

1. I adore it.
2. Add some chapters of Sunset connecting with Celestia and the other girls.
3. Sunset accepting Luna's love and getting rid of her self loathing.
4. Reunion with Twilight and the development of their friendship.

Psinet

1 love the story
2 More of her connecting with Celestia, the main 5, or someone else
3 Luna and Chrysalis making it official, one of the twilight, dazzlings
4 I hope for some surprises that I don't expect and for them to become a true family

1. It's actually nice, if a bit naive around the edges;
2. More character bonding activities and Sunsets attempts to being better person;
3. Princess Celestia's occurrence and all sorts of drama it could bring;
4. Next chapter before this year's end. :twilightsmile:

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