Mary-Sue Test: Leo (technically me, but I'm a pony so whatever) · 10:31pm Nov 25th, 2020
( ) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
( ) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
(X ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.
( ) Your OC has rainbow colors.
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
( ) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony.
( ) Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
( ) Are they taller than big Macintosh?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character?
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty?
( ) Are they royalty? (In spite of being an Alicorn, it's not royalty.)
( ) Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
( X) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character) (Single meeting, but it counts)
( ) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
() Your OC's Coat is Black
() Your OC has black and red in their design.
( ) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices.
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
( ) Your OC has encountered a non-revamped generation 1 character.
( ) Your OC is adored by all they meet.
( ) Your OC is hated by everyone.
( ) Except one?
( ) Do they have a similar/same mane to a character from the show.
( ) Your OC is a shipping baby
Total:
11 points! Not bad... could be worse
For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
( ) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
( ) Your OC is a smoker.
( ) Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them (Specify, Subtract 5 points) )He/I suck at flying, and is a WiP in magic. Isn't enough to be severe, I don't think... anyone who reads this, comment if being afraid to fly and being a WiP in magic counts.)
(X ) Your OC's cutie mark is something lame (like washing cars or something, Subtract 3 points) (Seriously, big spoilers here, but the cutie mark means that he/I'm human. How is that exciting?! I'm marking it unless you people say otherwise)
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator (Subtract 3 points) (Does being an edited vector count? Tell me if it does)
Grand Total: 8 (until someone says I should add or get rid of a marking)
1-9: Your OC is safe, relatively unique but not over the top.
10-19: Your OC is Moderate, but a little out of Show-Canon.
20-29: Your OC is a bit Mary-Sueish, you may want to revise some of their capabilities.
30-36: Your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you really should revise their capabilities.
36+: Your OC is an extreme Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you NEED to revise this character.
Well... if there aren't any problems with this, and everything is accurate, than even if it's still 11 points, I'm not a full-blown Mary-Sue! Hopefully, anyone that dislikes my series because I'm an alicorn can at least stop to think...