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Shimmeringsun


Just your average girl who stans Sunset Shimmer. 🤟🏼 Ship LunaXChrysalis 😛

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Nov
23rd
2020

Chapter 22 spoiler alert · 4:17am Nov 23rd, 2020

Hey guys! Long time, no blog! :raritywink: Anyway, I'm currently working on Chapter 22, and it currently stands at 12,000+ with three scenes. Some conflict happens between the characters, other stuff. Though I don't want to spoil too much, I'll leave you with a little something. Ps: I think, hopefully, the new chapter will be out next month, so keep your eyes peeled :raritystarry: Now, for the little spoiler!

”I know, but we can worry about that tomorrow.” Luna said in a motherly voice. ”It's time you get some rest.” She was quick to urge, and began pulling the covers back up to tuck Sunset and herself in. ”I will be here when you wake up.” 

”Do you promise?” Sunset pleaded, looking at Luna with childlike eyes. 

”I promise.” And with that, Luna looked down to her bundle of joy and gave Sunset one last kiss on the cheek. 

After a moment of silence, Sunset opened her eyes once more. ”Luna?” 

”Hm?” Luna turned her head to face Sunset.

”Why hasn't Chrysalis come back yet?” Sunset asked in concern. 

Luna gave Sunset’s shoulders another squeeze. ”Oh, you can talk to Chrysalis again tomorrow. Just go back to sleep. You’re alright now. I’ll keep the nightmares away.” She cooed softly and caressed Sunset’s face with her hand. Soon enough, Sunset began to close her eyes again and drifted off in Luna’s loving embrace, feeling at peace and content there.

Luna sighed and bit her lip. ”I hope you are alright, Chrysi.” She said to no one but herself, looking out into the distance towards Sunset’s window. ”Wherever you are.”

Comments ( 13 )

Can't wait and good luck

Oh this looks awesome I can't wait. I wish I could write that well too.

no. no no no no. Luna and Chryssi didn't...They aren't gonna...?

Long time no see, I was wondering where you've been. But your probably think the same about me. I'm in the same boat as you with long chapters. I didn't realize how much fun I'd have writing a chapter in forged in fire. While not as outstanding as your 12 K chapters, this first chapter is one of my longest ones yet.

Looking forward to it

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I can't confirm nor deny, though what I can say, everything in the new chapter happens for good reasons in the future

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Long chapters definitely take a toll on you, but I think it’ll all be worth it in the end! Unfortunately, I haven't been able to work on the story as much as I would like because college work is taking over :raritydespair: and it feels like it's never-ending! I can't wait to see what you have planned for forged in fire, I'm sure it will good! Also, how is the price of wanting coming along? If you ever need help, just give me a message! :twilightsmile:

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I hope you’ll enjoy it, and looking forward to seeing where your story goes, and hopefully a new chapter soon?

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Np. Been reading your story since it came out in October 2019,

5403604
*Gulp*

I'm genuinely terrified

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I hear you there with college. It's a never ending cycle of papers. Advance Expository Writing and Cultural Anthropology are kicking my butt. I can't say I've worked on the Price of Wanting all my attention is on Forged in Fire until I finish the chapter, than I'll focus on Wanting again.

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I'm hope to have it up by the end of the week

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