Next chapter finally done · 3:00am Nov 22nd, 2020
Good news everybody! I finally have the next chapter done, and will be going into editing in a few days.
This one was a lot harder to write then most of what had come before. In fact I spent a lot of time trying to work out exactly what was wrong with the chapter as what I was wanting to do wasn't really working at all! What really turned it around was realizing just how redundant most of the scenes were. While yes, they would move the story forward a fraction, they would also be repeating a lot of what had already been said.
So a couple days ago I decided the simplest thing to do was cut those scenes completely and merge my plans for the next two chapters into a single one. Once I did that, everything just sort of came together on it's own. It still might write up a bonus scene for a now excised subplot if I think it's interesting enough, but on the whole I'm satisfied with how this has turned out.
The new chapter is on my patreon, if you want a sneak peek.
Oh an upcoming update? Good man!
As one of the more unexpected and excellent stories I have read, I am quite thrilled to hear an update is on the way.
Lovely news