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Alaborn


Somewhere in the USA. Probably older than you. And something about MLP:FIM makes me want to write stories. Unfortunately, being gainfully employed cuts into my writing time.

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  • 145 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Strong Seconds

    Not an episode review this time.

    PresentPerfect writes about the "Applejack Problem", that a character with everything figured out becomes too boring. Her cutie mark is literally deciding she wants to stay home.

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    1 comments · 384 views
  • 146 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Putting Your Hoof Down and It's About Time

    S2E19 Putting Your Hoof Down

    Watching this episode as part of the whole series is jarring. You have episode after episode of ponies being kind and friendly, then a whole bunch of rude ponies all at once.

    I hate Angel Bunny in this episode. I want to turn him into hasenpfeffer.

    I'd like to know why there just happens to be a hedge maze somewhere near Ponyville.

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    3 comments · 212 views
  • 150 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Hearts and Hooves Day and A Friend in Deed

    S2E17 Hearts and Hooves Day

    The writers have chosen, once again, to feature a holiday or celebration in this episode. Arguably, this is the seventh time (Summer Sun Celebration, Winter Wrap Up, Running of the Leaves, Grand Galloping Gala, Nightmare Night, Hearth's Warming, Hearts and Hooves Day), and the third time directly referencing a major American holiday.

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    3 comments · 204 views
  • 151 weeks
    Retrospective Review: The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 and Read It and Weep

    S2E15 The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000

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    6 comments · 288 views
  • 151 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Baby Cakes and The Last Roundup

    S2E13 Baby Cakes

    So this was an episode that came completely out of the blue. There was no indication of Cup Cake being pregnant, let alone with twins. I'm assuming there was a toy involved.

    "That makes sense, right?" Sure, but if you're a pegasus stallion with a beige coat or a unicorn stallion with a yellow coat, I wouldn't recommend dining at Sugarcube Corner.

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Sep
29th
2020

Retrospective Review · 6:45am Sep 29th, 2020

Thinking about watching the whole series and reviewing it. "Now that we know everything that's going to happen in the series, how does this individual episode hold up?"

For example, Episode 1 makes no sense, unless Princess Celestia is a total troll. If your whole plot is to have your chosen student form a connection with ponies that embody the virtues that are the Elements of Harmony, so that your sister can be saved from madness, shouldn't said student know about the Elements of Harmony, so that she would know what to look for?

An alternate approach would be for Twilight Sparkle to be a jaded Canterlot resident: "Princess Celestia always taught me about the importance of honesty, generosity, kindness, loyalty, and laughter, but there's little honesty, generosity, kindness, loyalty, and laughter to be found in Canterlot." Then, when she's in Ponyville, she'll recognize these virtues on display.

Episode 2 was very important, showing the world that this was not your mother's My Little Pony, leading to adult and male fans following the series. But the one part that always bothered me was the honesty challenge. Just how hard would it have been for Applejack to say "Your friends are ready to catch you."?

What I really pick up from Episode 2 is why Dungeons & Dragons campaigns don't have races that fly. Because Episode 2 is filled with the obstacles you'd place in front of a low level adventuring party, but certainly two, and up to four, of the obstacles could be avoided by flying over them. A raging river and chasm with a missing bridge? Have the flying members of the party ferry the rest over. The cliff and manticore could also be arguably bypassed in the same way. In D&D, when you're around 9th level and find a suspicious bridge to cross, a couple of the characters start flying.

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I am entirely in favor of a full-series retrospective. Also, I wouldn't be surprised if a certain anonymous alicorn donated the Ponyville Library's copy of The Elements of Harmony: A Reference Guide a week before Twilight moved in.

PresentPerfect
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Yeah, it was less of an 'honesty challenge' and more a trust fall. :B

I actually do not believe that Twilight would have been helped by knowing about the Elements of Harmony. I believe that Celestia probably felt that knowing about the Elements would have led to Twilight trying to force insincere friendships that would have hindered her

We saw in Lesson Zero what Twilight is like when she thinks she isn't completing a lesson

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