Okay so Radience… my destiny story with our favorite bug. Needless to say I did not like where it was going. I fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, suddenly exposition dumping a lot without time to explore and stuff. I have taken to unpublishing chapters 3 and 4 since those are the problem ones.
Another thing is that the chapter title is called: Regret
Roger Roger- oop
My bad wrong thing.
The only thing he regrets is carrying a plasma pistol.
You wouldn't dare!
you havent yet
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PRICELESS
-Internationale peace day get a war chapter
-Regret as titel
-The update in general
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Great comments so far
The Kerensky bloodline approves.