The Dragon And The Pony 3 - Shakirin-La · 3:13pm Sep 17th, 2020
Hey there!
So I think I start to write the next story in that universe at the beginning of October this year. For doing so, I consider to change the viewpoint for the narration.
I think Fiery would be good to narrate the third story, but maybe change during the chapters or scenes as well. The benefit would be that it would bring a fresh wind to the narration, allow different views on the family and whats going on, so more insight for you guys of certain characters. Also on the family in general. And, in case of Fiery in particular, would bring a female viewpoint into play.
That be said, it could also be interesting to let NIghtflame or Kindling narrate some scenes to present their mindset and thought to the reader.
On the negative side however would be that this may confuse the readers, or make it a bit messy.
What do you guys think?
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There is also a discord channel for my stories to discuss such things:
https://discord.gg/w2g8bzx
Your story, wright it as you please.
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okay, thanks for your feedback
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You're welcome.
I think it would be a good change. Hearing from Fiery would be fun I think. Looking forward to this story!
Just saw this
I say writ it as you wis but I always liked the pov as it was because not many people write with the pov from a dragon.
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Thanks for your opinion Though, yes, you are a bit late for the party, I already have started writing from Fiery's POV, though, I am sure I can work in a few scenes from the perspective of TBD and Nightflame as well